| "Dangerous Pastimes" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: holly On: July 22, 2002 17:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm writing the second time but if it helps to make you write the next chapter sooner... ;-) I just love your story! Go on like that, please! |
Reviewed By: Avezinzi On: July 14, 2002 13:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great chappie! write more! |
Reviewed By: holly On: July 13, 2002 21:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
It's really great! I mean the idea and your style, the story and all that together.... Simply great! Please write the next chapter soon!!! |
Reviewed By: Asanra On: July 13, 2002 14:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey hun,another great chapter,but for some reason,i like it better on ff.net |
