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| "Keeping It (Desires Book 2)" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Title: The Great and Powerful
Reviewed By: Luci On: March 30, 2008 21:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OKAY OKAY OKAY OKAY! Here's the thing. I KNOW THAT YOU'RE REWRITING IT! REALLY, I DO! But you simply CANNOT just leave it like this. Because you see, when I realized that this was the last thing that was ever written in the series, I literally screamed. And that prompted questions from my mum and it was this whole big thing, because when she looked on the computer screen there was gay sex all over it and oh my god, you must do something with this series. I just spent the majority of two days on it. SO NOW I, LUCI, THE GREAT AND POWERFUL, DO COMMAND YOU TO... Do something with this story? Please? Pleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleaseple asepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleaseplease pleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleaseple asepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleaseplease pleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleaseple asepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleaseplease pleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleaseple asepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleaseplease . Okay? Okay.
| Reviewed By: Dark_Angle666 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2008 07:55 CST
Comment/Review:
Hey there! The begining to book two looks really good! Way to start things off, with a great big Pow! Anyway, my advice would be to re write book one. I really like the story, but if you think you can improve upon it, by all means, get started. I find that if you have ideas or an outline for the second book, write them down. That way when you finish book one (again) You can start posting book two write away. Well, that's my advice, tkae it as you will. I wish you the best of luck and can brly wait to the finished prduct. You are a very talented writter and I enjoy reading all of yor stories. That reminds me; I've read 'A Fugative and Me' and I really like it. It's really funny and sweet, a good (although there are still some mystery) plot line. So, keep up the good work and I'll continue to read! ~Sherubii~
| Reviewed By: mindfreak (not signed in cuz i lost my password...again) On: January 02, 2008 22:02 CST
Comment/Review:
i wish you would just keep going dammit your killing me...this plot is just too good...update soon!
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