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| "Boredom" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Mayachan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2008 14:13 CST
Comment/Review:
Waa, there were a lot of mistakes again?! D: God dammit! I never really notice them when I'm writing it, or checking it.>< Amb, you have to start being my beta reader person, 'kay?
| Reviewed By: SilentOmen [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2008 04:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Spelling could use work.. but overall, the story was so awesome! Nice work with Tanshin and Taven! I was giggling the entire time, seeing my characters go at it like that. I should make more hot characters so they can be in a fanfic as well X3. I would want Alec to be part of one.. but he's not gay. But he could be in the fanfiction world, hey? XP -so evil- You did a great job with this, especially for your second fic. Keep em comin'. XD
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