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| "Damned If You Do, Damned If You Don't" Reviews/Comments [ 29 ] | | Pages (2): [ « ‹ 1 2 ] | Reviewed By: Niiicko [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2008 14:26 CST
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Very nice. Love the descriptions! ^.^ Keep up the great work! *cheers*
| Reviewed By: Midoriko-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2008 14:19 CST
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Wooop! Kiss her boy! Come on, give us another one! I do suspect, my dear Come Hither, that Inuyasha's love balls just about dropped - and Kagome's about to rule them X'D. I'm looking forward to the next one of these! Thanks bunches for updating and making my day! *goes off to re-read the rest of your stuff*
| Reviewed By: Sassa [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2008 14:19 CST
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I really love how you've cut out all the drama in the most dramatic parts. The nightly walk with all the romantic mood is a mix twix angsty memory lane and repressed hornyness, the anonising cry after the beloved one is a ruckus more annoying and humorous than anything else, the genuine remorse turns to a meek "let's call it quits" and the grand final gesture gets ruined by an unseen coming kiss. I LOVE it, being a pragmatic girl as I am. : )
| Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2008 04:00 CST
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"His head tilted in that way that males do when they think it'll give them a better ass viewing angle. my favorite line in this story. wonderful, intelligent, witty, entertaining and addictive. i shall be in eager expectation of my next fix. ~ thank you, ginny
| Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: ScifiAmy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2008 00:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
So worth the wait!!!! Chapter 2 was amazing! I loved the Kikyo/Kagome interaction. Wonderfully done. I just wish I didn't start reading this so late. *sigh* My brain is fried, but I will say I love the kiss and the end of the chapter. YOU GO GIRL! BTW: I hope the withdrawls are better and you didn't start up again!
| Reviewed By: aprildiamond [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2008 00:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am so very glad to see a new story from you! Your droll wit and biting sarcasam are just so much fun to read. Your writing is so descriptive and rich that I can just "see" all of it go down in my head as I am reading. wonderful as always.
| Reviewed By: Midoriko-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2008 14:40 CST
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You're welcome *grin* Now, I'll say that I'm about to start keeping tabs on this fic - seems like I have myself another favourite of yours. And thank you for the research you did in medicine, although the nonchalance and frequency in which the medical terms are used indicate more of an every day use, and therefore make me think you work in that sector. Whatever the case, thank you very much for this lovely slice of goodness - I'll be staying for the whole cake and coffee lass, thanks. :p
| Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2008 02:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read the other half (SplendentGoddess's contribution) of the challenge already and I am eagerly awaiting the completion of your half. You are right, set-ups are a pain to write. But if there was no set-up the story would make no sense since the reader would not know where the story starts from. Please continue whenever you can.
| Reviewed By: Wowzer313 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2008 01:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Jeez, you're funny. But I suppose you hear that all the time. FYI, I'm enjoying the little 'triple-dog-dare' war that two very talented authors have going on here; the results are incredible. Anyway. Sarcasm always gets me, and yours has to be some of the best. As far as grammar, I love the fact that you utilize complex sentences, as opposed to the standard 'He did this. She did that. They all went here.' Totally adds dimension to your story. Can't wait to see where it goes! Well done-Wowzer313
| Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2008 23:24 CST
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inner dialog, inner musings. you always write with wit and wry humor. ~as always a pleasure, ginny
| Title: Awesomely terrific
Reviewed By: ScifiAmy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2008 21:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First, thank you for posting a new story. Second, shame on you for leaving it up in the air like that and waving chapter 3 and 4 at us but no chapter 2? This story started out terrific. But now my body is quivering for more, more, more!!!! (Does that help with writing chapter 2?) LOL Sorry your going through with withdrawls, but glad you are quiting. It's a nasty habit. Keep up all the wonderful stories that you do. And I guess I'll just have to wait (hopeful not too long) for chapter 2.
| Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2008 18:10 CST
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Wow. This is really nice. Very, very well put together. I love this more mature, introspective Kagome, w/o the 'know it all brattishness'. Very well put, by the way. Love the humour here, the cow/castor oil, squid tossing, hell/well diggers behind. I like that K can find amusement in IY's ogling (however well hidden), and that she realizes that negativity damages herself far worse. Sad yet understanding, and even approving, of Sango's withdrawel treatment of Miroku. They are all changing, and growing. Love the scene at Kik's shrine, K with her sassiness and self assured attitude. But does Kikyou actually have her soul, or was it just an attention getter? Is Kikyou going to blackmail K some way? Possess her? Or finally grow up herself and work with Kagome? Again, this was just amazing. I haven't read anything this perfect, that just grabbed me right off like this, in a long time. I can't wait to see where you take this. Excellent, excellent chapter!
| Reviewed By: Fanfactor [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2008 09:57 CST
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I have never read any of your stories but this is good. I enjoyed the sarcastic streak of Kagome, that really still stuck to the manga. The ghost is creepy I have to admit but still good. This chapter was really well written and you will do good again. I can't wait for your next chapter!
| Title: Yay!
Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2008 04:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, first the "SplendentGoddess-like" response. They say that all good things come to those who wait, and I am proud to say that this story has proven to be no exception. Your level of creative genius never fails to amaze me. Okay, now the "un-SplendentGoddess-like" response. YOU ROCK! I told you you had it in you to do a multi-chapter; you go girl! Hey, you're a crazy bitch, but you write so good I'm on top of it...hehehehehe. I just knew there was a reason why I suddenly woke up and couldn't go back to sleep. True story...just now I was laying in bed and thought, hey, I guess I'll go check out what's on MM for a tick...BEST. DECISION. EVER.
| Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2008 00:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah yes, breaking in tradition and goin straight for the Triple Dog Dare. hehe. Never conform I always say, lol. As for the nom, tis guilty *waves hands slightly and smiles...* I just had to! It was a moral imperative... well, it just had to be done! Lol. Heh, I always look forward to something you've wrote, cause it always makes my day a little brighter, and this ones no exception. And just loved what SG came up with for the dare, and told her as well. OOOH, y'all should do this more often, lol. This is great. Update when ya can! ;)
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