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| "Shadow Magic - Zelgadis and Lina" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Sid B. On: July 02, 2009 01:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm not gonna pick apart the grammer or writting, though flow could be improved, but I am interested in seeing where the story goes, since some of the concept seemed interesting. Maybe more development of the scenes would be nice but not necessary, just the promise of an adventure is always enticing enough for me. So, I'd really like to see what you do with this.
| Reviewed By: triva On: February 05, 2008 15:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update soon! This first chapter has captivated my interest, and I eagerly await the next. There just aren't enough good Slayers fics out there, you know?, so I'm really grateful for this one.
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