| "Forbidden Kiss" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Title: twins
Reviewed By: anime1lover On: December 20, 2009 03:20 CST
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I want a boy and a girl. it would be cute. I so can't wait to read about a pregnant Ichigo.
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Title: awesome
Reviewed By: OrlandosLover09 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2009 15:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesome story! its so steamy! i love mpreg so i there should be 2 babies the more the merrier
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Reviewed By: waterslave1 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2009 22:35 CST
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I say that any more than one kid and they'll both have nervous breakdowns... A boy would be cool. A nice calm one, that doesn't cry very often.
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Reviewed By: Sweetdeily [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2008 10:22 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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Ten because, and only because you killed me laughing at "Gawd damn, baby. Do you have any idea what you're doing to me?" from Byakuya. I swear to god I just stopped, reread the line and pissed myself it was that funny. I was having rip-roaring mental images of this scene taking place, which is probably why I need new pants, especially the 'gawds' and the vocals from Byakuya- not to mention Ichigo's sudden uke-ism. But aside from the brain-slugs on their heads, I enjoyed the visuals. You've got good description, but perhaps lay off on lines like "The boy's hands reached into Byakuya's loincloth and pulled out his hungry staff." as they are a wee bit... hard to swallow *pun fully intended* so early on in the lemony goodness. Otherwise, if this wasn't an m-preg I would read more, but I value my standards and sanity, thus, I leave you with congrats on being my first hilarious fic in over a year, and I hope to read more, as your stuff is signature worthy all the way!!! ^___^
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Title: great fic
Reviewed By: petrona On: April 20, 2008 18:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, great story. I really enjoyed it, and I think that the pregnancy should result in twins. Also, if possible can toushiro hitsugaya and Zaraki kenpachi make an appearance.
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Reviewed By: harderfasterplease [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2008 14:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
pretty good. Although I wouldn't make myself read some parts. I like the...creativity.
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Reviewed By: ying9 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2008 01:05 CDT
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This is wonderful smut!!! >.< Plus, it is just so heart warming~~~ Please let he be preg by the man he loves!!!
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Reviewed By: I_love_yaoi On: March 10, 2008 09:09 CDT
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I like it very much... there is not very much story out there about Ichigo get screw and pregnet.. he he he They should have twins.. a pair of twins... that sound so cute.... awwwww please continue.....
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Title: whyyyy
Reviewed By: netha On: March 10, 2008 09:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is actually great... buttt..... When can we read the continuation of the story.. I have waited too long... This is a Bleach story that I really like to read... Please continue
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Reviewed By: Don't_Got_One On: February 27, 2008 17:19 CST
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I like this! and your story! and mprep(I can't find a lot TT_TT)! Contine! Please! They should have twins, one male, the other female. Name the boy Kiyoshi (means Quiet) and the girl Suki (means Beloved). Those were the only things that came up.
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Title: twins
Reviewed By: white_rabbit [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2008 22:18 CST
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I love you! No really I do. not enough people like mpreg. There should be twins, twin boys I have name ideas if youwant some. anyth- anything else.... oh you better keep writing or... or... i won't give you a cookie. Ha! (i'm so evil)
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