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Reviewed By: fudge On: January 05, 2008 01:33 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
talk about great writing! your story is full of descriptions and it just makes it that much better than it already is! hopefully you update very soon and keep up the amazing work.
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2008 00:34 CST
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ah omg i love it! lol it's incredible and inspiring. if i wasn't so damn tired i'd go write right now.
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Reviewed By: inuyashaluverchicka On: January 04, 2008 22:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You sure do pay attention to detail, and that's what make you such a good writer. I'm glad you updated so soon, and I hope you will again! Anyways, this was another great chapter, and I hope to see the story updated soon.
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Reviewed By: Wowzer313 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2008 18:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! At first I was thinking, okay, typical roomate fic, girl and guy live together, girl an guy are attracted to each other, girl and guy sleep with each other, the end. But you have me pleasantly surprised. I think it's a really unique angle you've found here; making Kagome simply lust after Inuyasha without all the mushy stuff first. (Not that the mushy stuff is bad lol) And the details! There are tons. To me, details add depth and dimension to a story, and yours is loaded with them! It truly makes for a good read. The introspection that you give from each of the characters is dynamite as well--it keeps the reader's attention. Keep up the great work! Wowzer313
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Reviewed By: future author On: January 04, 2008 13:11 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey!! That was mean. Why oh why did you leave it there. I can't wait to see what happens next. It's going to be very interesting to say the least. :sigh: Update soon please. Until the next update, good luck.
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Reviewed By: FayeMegan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2008 11:18 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read 2 chapters of this on AFF.net, and I really like it. This story is written very well and I would love to read more!
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Reviewed By: Totally Kawaii [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2008 11:16 CST
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That was superbly written and very nicely characterized (*coughKagomecough*). Inuyasha made me drool. XD Anyway, it's a really great story so far and though the plot is cliché at first sight, I'm positive that an amazing author like you can make it their own. Hope you update soon!
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Reviewed By: youkaineko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2008 06:03 CST
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Wow. Please, please write more VERY soon. That was... wow, yeah...
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Reviewed By: inuyahsaluverchicka On: January 04, 2008 02:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
...I'm speechless...in a good way. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
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