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Title: Chap.3
Reviewed By: pup [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2008 08:05 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was sweet, and cute, and hot and ... they end up together!
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Title: Chap.2
Reviewed By: pup [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2008 07:47 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hahha, the little mayhems that kept happening are kinda funny but I'm hoping that they'll get on with it, hahha... ooh, dirty!
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Title: Chap.1
Reviewed By: pup [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2008 07:36 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG. You're good, really good! Well detailed, I could clearly picture everything! Sighs... he's a GOD.
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Title: The Ending
Reviewed By: Wowzer313 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2008 16:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool! (Thanks for the shout-out!)I'm sad it had to end, but I totally understand--a story's gotta end where a story's gotta end! I checked my email this morning and read the last two chapters before dashing off to school, thinking 'Man, I've got to remember to leave a nice hefty review for 'Three Months' when I get back.' I wanted to make sure I got out everything I wanted to say. So. Here it goes. In the mess of lemons that Mediaminer and any kind of fanfic site is smattered with, I must say that this has to be one of the most tasteful--even with Inuyasha being as 'kinky' as you imply! You have a real sense of pacing--something I find terribly important in any piece of fiction. There's nothing worse than a rushed, jumbled fic. You've really got it down to a science. And those similes? Amazing! They were very rich and just add a little extra 'pop' to your story. As for specifics? (Because I love it when people tell me specific parts of my stories that they liked, so I'll do the same for you!)Lets see...I loved Kagome's quick little mental Calculus--very cute! And may I just say, that the slip ups in the bathroom were hilarious? You construct a scene where the reader can truly envision the characters slipping in shampoo--while trying to remain cool and sexy. Very well done. I look forward to more of your work. ~Wowzer313
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Reviewed By: inuy21 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2008 16:13 CST
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*SQUEE* I'm so glad you finished it! It was SSSSOOOO Good and would make for an interesting story, but I makes a good three-shot as well. Very satisfying ^_^
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2008 12:52 CST
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wonderful! lol i was so excited to see this! yeah i've started writing but it's going slowly =/ great finale!
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2008 08:23 CST
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Hot and steamy, but tender and sweet too. Well done.
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Reviewed By: youkaineko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2008 07:13 CST
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How do I put this? I got so caught up in the details I forgot to pay attention to the story. This had some of the best similes I've ever seen. Seriously. I read and reread several paragraphs over and over, before going "oh yeah let's see what's going on in the rest of the story". I think that three of them will stick with me for a very long time. The zealot water droplets, the courtesan curls and Inuyasha the pesky X. Truly beautiful. *smirk* Oh and the story wasn't too bad either. *grin* I hope you feel the urge to have other writing "exercises"; you have made a fan with this one.
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Reviewed By: inuy21 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2008 20:18 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Hahahha.....that so awesome! Cracks me up and can't wait to read more. Don't know how it would've been as a one-shot, but I'm glad you made it into a story ^_^
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Reviewed By: youkaineko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2008 19:54 CST
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*Grumble* grrrrr... stupid MM always does weird things to my quotes and apostrophes and such... the f'ed up words are (quote) wow (end quote) and cliched (but with an acent over the e)
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Reviewed By: youkaineko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2008 19:48 CST
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*grin* I'm glad you liked my “wowâ€. To be perfectly honest I'm normally more verbose then that, but you actually caused my brain to shut down, hence the “wowâ€. Anyway, caught ch2... Sadly not total brain melt down that ch1 triggered, but still I liked it a lot, so no wow, actual commentary instead *shudder*. I still can't believe that this was only a writing exercise for you, it's far too well written, too in-depth, too well conceived (even if clichéd scenario) to just be simple mental masturbation which after all if what a writing exercise is. I love that Kagome had no problem with him muff diving but heaven forbid he try to kiss her or anything. Then again it is totally realistic for a sexually inexperienced woman like Kagome to be conflicted between what she wants and what she is willing act on. *smirk* See told you I normally write long reviews/commentary. Anyway looking forward to more soon and eagerly anticipate the eventual claiming.
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Reviewed By: sweetkijo [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2008 18:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whooot!! That was fun!! The story is well written and had me blusing, and that my dear is hard to do. Cant wait to read the next chapter. Thanks for the update!
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Reviewed By: sweetkijo [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2008 18:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, I read chapter one. Lemme just say...Oh God, I would die!! Just fall over in the shower dead!!Now I am gonna read chapter two.....lmao!!
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Reviewed By: Totally Kawaii [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2008 05:33 CST
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Kleenex and almost-decapitation is good, don't worry. XD Thanks for such a quick update! LOL... update soon!
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Title: Funny c
Reviewed By: Hollywood1 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2008 01:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like how dep in detail you get!!, this story is funny too!!! InuYahsa and Kagome both knew they want eachother it was pretty cold how she let him hanging, but it was funny as heck too. cant wait for th next chapter wonder wgat will happen next
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