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Reviewed By: youkaineko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2008 19:54 CST
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*Grumble* grrrrr... stupid MM always does weird things to my quotes and apostrophes and such... the f'ed up words are (quote) wow (end quote) and cliched (but with an acent over the e)
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Reviewed By: youkaineko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2008 19:48 CST
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*grin* I'm glad you liked my “wowâ€. To be perfectly honest I'm normally more verbose then that, but you actually caused my brain to shut down, hence the “wowâ€. Anyway, caught ch2... Sadly not total brain melt down that ch1 triggered, but still I liked it a lot, so no wow, actual commentary instead *shudder*. I still can't believe that this was only a writing exercise for you, it's far too well written, too in-depth, too well conceived (even if clichéd scenario) to just be simple mental masturbation which after all if what a writing exercise is. I love that Kagome had no problem with him muff diving but heaven forbid he try to kiss her or anything. Then again it is totally realistic for a sexually inexperienced woman like Kagome to be conflicted between what she wants and what she is willing act on. *smirk* See told you I normally write long reviews/commentary. Anyway looking forward to more soon and eagerly anticipate the eventual claiming.
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Reviewed By: sweetkijo [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2008 18:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whooot!! That was fun!! The story is well written and had me blusing, and that my dear is hard to do. Cant wait to read the next chapter. Thanks for the update!
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Reviewed By: sweetkijo [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2008 18:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, I read chapter one. Lemme just say...Oh God, I would die!! Just fall over in the shower dead!!Now I am gonna read chapter two.....lmao!!
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Reviewed By: Totally Kawaii [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2008 05:33 CST
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Kleenex and almost-decapitation is good, don't worry. XD Thanks for such a quick update! LOL... update soon!
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Reviewed By: Hollywood1 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2008 01:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like how dep in detail you get!!, this story is funny too!!! InuYahsa and Kagome both knew they want eachother it was pretty cold how she let him hanging, but it was funny as heck too. cant wait for th next chapter wonder wgat will happen next
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Reviewed By: fudge On: January 05, 2008 01:33 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
talk about great writing! your story is full of descriptions and it just makes it that much better than it already is! hopefully you update very soon and keep up the amazing work.
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2008 00:34 CST
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ah omg i love it! lol it's incredible and inspiring. if i wasn't so damn tired i'd go write right now.
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Reviewed By: inuyashaluverchicka On: January 04, 2008 22:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You sure do pay attention to detail, and that's what make you such a good writer. I'm glad you updated so soon, and I hope you will again! Anyways, this was another great chapter, and I hope to see the story updated soon.
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Reviewed By: Wowzer313 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2008 18:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! At first I was thinking, okay, typical roomate fic, girl and guy live together, girl an guy are attracted to each other, girl and guy sleep with each other, the end. But you have me pleasantly surprised. I think it's a really unique angle you've found here; making Kagome simply lust after Inuyasha without all the mushy stuff first. (Not that the mushy stuff is bad lol) And the details! There are tons. To me, details add depth and dimension to a story, and yours is loaded with them! It truly makes for a good read. The introspection that you give from each of the characters is dynamite as well--it keeps the reader's attention. Keep up the great work! Wowzer313
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Reviewed By: future author On: January 04, 2008 13:11 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey!! That was mean. Why oh why did you leave it there. I can't wait to see what happens next. It's going to be very interesting to say the least. :sigh: Update soon please. Until the next update, good luck.
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Reviewed By: FayeMegan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2008 11:18 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read 2 chapters of this on AFF.net, and I really like it. This story is written very well and I would love to read more!
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Reviewed By: Totally Kawaii [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2008 11:16 CST
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That was superbly written and very nicely characterized (*coughKagomecough*). Inuyasha made me drool. XD Anyway, it's a really great story so far and though the plot is cliché at first sight, I'm positive that an amazing author like you can make it their own. Hope you update soon!
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Reviewed By: youkaineko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2008 06:03 CST
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Wow. Please, please write more VERY soon. That was... wow, yeah...
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Reviewed By: inuyahsaluverchicka On: January 04, 2008 02:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
...I'm speechless...in a good way. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
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