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| "Love Is A Battlefield" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] | Reviewed By: Trunks Serenity Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2002 12:33 CDT
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keep on goin i really like this story!!! | Reviewed By: kimaru On: August 04, 2002 02:56 CDT
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I still think this is a really good chapter. *can't stop the smile* I like how Ryo makes lame jokes, it sounds like something he would do. :) "Did I mention he has been a dork lately?" This line is really well pulled off. ^^ All the squabbling from these two never gets me tired, I don't know why, but they seem such interesting and enticing pair to me. Oh yeah, I did notice the pants this time, thanks to your hint. *winks* It was pretty subtle; however, I did see it the first time, but just didn't comment on it. Hehehe...Ruki looking at Ryo's pants. Okay, now I officially can't wipe that dratted smile off my face. >DO think that vest makes me (or my friend) look fat. | Reviewed By: moonfighter753951 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2002 16:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good ryoki forever!!! | Reviewed By: kimaru On: August 04, 2002 02:58 CDT
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I still think this is a really good chapter. *can't stop the smile* I like how Ryo makes lame jokes, it sounds like something he would do. :) "Did I mention he has been a dork lately?" This line is really well pulled off. ^^ All the squabbling from these two never gets me tired, I don't know why, but they seem such interesting and enticing pair to me. Oh yeah, I did notice the pants this time, thanks to your hint. *winks* It was pretty subtle; however, I did see it the first time, but just didn't comment on it. Hehehe...Ruki looking at Ryo's pants. Okay, now I officially can't wipe that dratted smile off my face. >DO think that vest makes me (or my friend) look fat. | Reviewed By: kimaru On: August 04, 2002 02:59 CDT
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I still think this is a really good chapter. *can't stop the smile* I like how Ryo makes lame jokes, it sounds like something he would do. :) "Did I mention he has been a dork lately?" This line is really well pulled off. ^^ All the squabbling from these two never gets me tired, I don't know why, but they seem such interesting and enticing pair to me. Oh yeah, I did notice the pants this time, thanks to your hint. *winks* It was pretty subtle; however, I did see it the first time, but just didn't comment on it. Hehehe...Ruki looking at Ryo's pants. Okay, now I officially can't wipe that dratted smile off my face. > | Reviewed By: Trunks Serenity Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2002 20:52 CDT
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keep on writen ill keep reviewin!!! | Reviewed By: Valcrist God of protection [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2002 16:52 CDT
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Just wanted to say it is very cool and intriguing. I hope I spelled that right. Any who....well keep it up and get some sleep staying up that late can't help the brain. Heh I should know. Six all nighters really sock it to the thinking process. ;)
V --)---- | Reviewed By: kimaru On: July 13, 2002 02:28 CDT
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"Tashika ni kimi wa Queen, kedo dattara ore ga King da na!"
I think that means: "If you're the queen, that would make me the king." Just guessing, if anybody else actually read through the review section for fun like I do. ^^* Very, very cute chapter! *squeals* It almost had me like Jenruki, almost....I mean almost. I'm still a genuine rukyo fan, and nothing could change that. Hehehe...sounds like Jen is a bit too friendly with Ruki, then again, Jen is friendly with everybody, since he is Mr. Friendly. *wonders what on earth is the point of all my rambles* Ryo is all mysterious and inattached...wonder what really happened in the SwanSea game? Anyone? I only know something about Millie and Mono jogressed into a digi-egg and something about the dimension twist. Oi, that doesn't help much about Ryo's past now, does it? ^^* At least now we sort of have an imaginative picture of what Ryo is like after the dimesion warp. Really nice chapter, especially on the teasing part of Jen competing for Ryo, love it! Looking VERY much forward to the laser tag! Yeah! ^_______^ | Reviewed By: Oichijouji [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2002 19:30 CDT
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Aww... Ryo/Ruki! Yeah!!! And you mentioned Ken and (well kinda) Osamu (huggles Osamu)
Osamu: GET OFF ME!
Sorry. Great chapter. I hope you get the next one up sometime soon
Oichijouji
P.S.: What does this mean? "Tashika ni kimi wa Queen, kedo dattara ore ga King da na!"
I have an idea, but I want to just check. | Reviewed By: Hyper Gurl On: July 12, 2002 12:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey I read this on fanfiction.net today! I reviewed it too! I love this story. *gets big starry eyes* Ryuki. Sorry bout that I'm just a little weird right now. *whining* please more, please more, please more. I wanna know what happens ;_;. *big starry eyes again* Ryuki....... | Reviewed By: kimaru On: July 02, 2002 22:27 CDT
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Hey!!!!!! *whines annoyingly and loudly* That is torture!!!! Don't leave the readers hanging in on the cliff! >< I was just getting really intrigued when the story suddenly ended!!! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH.....! *calms down* Ok...*smiles* I'm controlled now...oh no, you don't have to back away! I won't hurt anybody. *Yama ties chains around Kimaru* What are you doing, Yama?! What, I need to be tied so I won't be a threat to innocent citizens out there? What are you saying?! I'm no animal! *tears up* Are you scared of me? Oh, you're not! You're just concerned that I might get arrested? *cheers up* That's ok, for the love of all citizens, I shall tolerate these chains. *crowd coughs* Oh yeah! Back to the review....like I was saying, *sweatdrops* what was I saying? *Yama points to the top* Oh yeah, thanks for reminding, hon, I was saying that the whole story was heating up and I b>DEMAND MOOOOOOOOORE!!!!!! *eyes turn misty* Please write the next chapter soon and don't leave us in suspense, ok? Yama-chan here and I love Rukyo (but not the ones out of character) and you make the stories sound really interesting, too. *giggles* Yes, I have split personality. (as if one personality doesn't scare enough people already ^^*) Hehe...writing inspirations are like that! Ruki, keep on driving Riah-chan to write more! Please post a message on the board when a new chapter comes out! ^_______^ | Reviewed By: Oichijouji [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2002 10:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi! I saw your fics on Megchans board and I thought I'd check them out here, since stupid FF.N isn't working AGAIN! *rolls eyes* I like the story. I'm a die hard Ryo/Ruki fan! They just 'fit' you know. This is a really good story, I liked how you put the charicters. Not out of style, just older. =) I liked them | Reviewed By: kimaru On: July 11, 2002 17:38 CDT
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It's surprising to see Ruki being the more talkive one than Ryo. She doesn't understand much of Ryo's past, does she? Neither do I, really, ^^* the only time I see Ryo is Tamers and here and there in the 02 and movie. Ryo is like a ghost, that fades in and out. *receives glares* But I hope he haunts me!! *receives weird looks* OK...hehe...what do you want me to say? Riah, you have to make the chapters LONGER!!!!! *begs* The story is beginning to heat up and then it ends....ARG! Go Ruki muse! Make Riah put up another longer chapter sooooooooooon! *Yama comes out* What? I should write my own Rukyo? Maybe...but I am too lazy! *blows raspberry* I'm drawing some stuff, but I can't seem to have the inspiration of drawing the two together yet...What do you mean it will be another century before I actually DO anything?! Yama! You're being a little too annoying today. *pouts* I know you're trying to encourage me, but I'm just...GAK! Back to review, shall we? I always go off track, don't I? I wished I could play the game that sucked Ryo in, then I would actually understand the whole deal of Ryo being dropped off in an alternate dimension. I can't wait for Laser Tag!!! I played it only once, and it was pretty fun. :) I am sure Ryo and Ruki are going to have a blast there. Hope Ruki would have a better luck understanding Ryo's history than I do. ^^ |
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