| "Nasty Little Habit" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Title: I just love your style
Reviewed By: inuyoukai2007 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2008 18:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really, you have a marvolous style of writing, this has got to be one of the first reviews I've bothered to write in months if not a year. I read your other one shot and I really think you have a great talent for them.
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Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2008 22:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it! I'm so glad you took the time to write this! You have such a wonderful style that draws the reader in do deeply... this story without a lemon is like that him playing that song without singing it. Perfect...
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Reviewed By: Elemental_Dea [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2008 19:30 CST
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i love this! your style of writing is amazing. each possibly minor detail you add bring the story to life.
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Reviewed By: TuxedoUranus89 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2008 22:06 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww, very cute! I had a good laugh over nervous, babbling Kagome, but the story was nicely done, flowed well, and good for a girl who's procrastinating on her culture studies reading. XD
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Reviewed By: Cianna27889 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2008 06:01 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What do I think, you ask?! I think I'm still trying to catch my breath!! Great form, style, creativity- just REALLY well done! I was hanging on every line, Cianna
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Reviewed By: Stef with an F On: January 05, 2008 03:55 CST
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I wandered over here from T.S.E at ff.net, and I've found it completly ironic that you've written a fic about habits when I was just thinking the same about reading and admitably, re-reading your work. =] This little fic was amazing, even a bit painful. Thre's so much to your story, I was trembling at the edge of my seat hoping this wouldn't go wrong for Kagome and how crazy it was for her to bare her soul to a complete, albiet sexy, stranger. Can you believe how worked up I got despite how much the voice in the back of my head highly doubted you'd leave me with a horrible ending? Yeah, me neither!=] There is just something in the way you write that always keeps me looking out for your updates. Take Care!
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2008 00:48 CST
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whoa! i really liked that! very creative!
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2008 00:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now this was good! Did get me a bit confused on a few things, but everything else was great! And the song, I love. All in all, it was great!
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Reviewed By: Come Hither [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2008 20:13 CST
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Actually, I think a lemon might have ruined it. They say build-up is like ninety percent of the actual pleasure, and you certainly had that going on. Very nice how you hinted around at the chemistry and sensuality lurking beneath the surface. I myself am guilty of cramming unwarranted lemons down people's throats, so I really appreciate the information you withheld. Sometimes it's nice to leave the rest to your readers' imaginations, and you have an unquestionable knack for that! Congrats.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2008 16:24 CST
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"clichéd" chiched with the little mark over the 'e'... this site doesn't acknowledge those things.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2008 16:21 CST
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nah, you don't need a lemon. i think the interaction is more interesting than a pwp. i personally would rather imagine a relationship developing instead of the one night stand (i've lived both) where she's the endearing ditz that he takes the time to know. besides i'm the old fashioned type who finds it more titillating to have the hint and fade to waves crashing on the shore than to graphic blow by blow. besides there are no new and unique ways to describe the dragon visiting the cave so reading the same scene with slight variation in descriptive terms or order is somewhat clichéd and annoyingly redundant. . . this was a wonderful nasty little habit. ~ thank you, ginny
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Reviewed By: Midoriko-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2008 15:42 CST
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*wolf whistles shameslesly* Give us another one! This nice little one-shot is really good! But next time, don't forget the lemon meringue! I'm absolutely certain you'll manage it if you keep trying it in private and showing it to your beta-readers. Not all of us are natural lemon authors (tell me about it; i can light a 4000watt light bulb after I've finished writing a love scene) but as Eco used to say - authorship is the most malleable of professions; there is no genre one cannot achieve through mere practice and an appropriate dictionary.
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Reviewed By: BlackMamba07 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2008 15:30 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I immensely enjoyed this little one shot. You have a great knack for using little details to bring your stories to life. And I love the Inuyashas you create! He's absolutely my favorite character, and it's nice when people do him justice.(P.S... take your time writing ze lemonz, but I'm sure it'll be great if you ever try your hand at one....) I can't wait to read what you post next... another chapter of T.S.E., perhaps?
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Reviewed By: Tobers On: January 04, 2008 14:05 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You did not need a lemon in my opinion...Your story was great as is. I found myself grinning from ear to ear by the time I had finished. A VERY refreshing change to the norm of writing lately. Again most enjoyable, engaging dialogue with an easy banter. I can see these two heading off into the sunset......You did an excellent job with setting the scene and plot development as well. Your storyline flowed nicely. Thank you
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2008 11:15 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice story... really cute... liked it... good job... great work... HAPPY NEW YEAR!
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