| "Carlisle and Esme's first time" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Title: good
Reviewed By: Jasmine Grace Cullen-Volturi On: November 25, 2015 20:42 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Im the sam age as you since saturday and i barely think as graphic
as that so i give you a 2000000 ou of 100
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Title: WOW^^
Reviewed By: animelover69 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2009 21:16 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
What?! your fifteen!! Um.. this is well um.. interesting. I'd like to see you write more stories though.
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Reviewed By: jojo644897 On: May 13, 2008 22:04 PDT
Comment/Review:
it's cute that you think that's too graphic
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Reviewed By: white_rabbit [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2008 17:22 PST
Comment/Review:
great story isn't reading fun! you've got a few gammer mistakes and you need to watch your typing. good luck with your other writings, ya might need it.
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Title: wow ^^
Reviewed By: Britni Fullmetal Otaku [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2008 23:06 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'm very surprised how good you wrote this being a fifteen year old virgin!! lol i am too -_-;; my cousin, who is almost as obsessed over twilight as me, told me about your story and told me i should read it. i usually don't like sex stories and all that but this was quite good! very cute and romantic. when i first saw it was about carlisle and esme i though "ehh..." but after i read it i thought it was very cute ^_^ haha ok i'm going to shutup now. if you ever get the chance read my newest story and review. thanks and keep writing!! =]
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