| "Selfish" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: demon's purity [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2009 21:24 CDT
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oh! i read this story on fanfiction! i favorited it on that site too :)
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Reviewed By: Natsumi Tsuchi-Ookami [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2008 10:36 CST
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This was really good! I love it! It's so true! Can we have a sequel of this? Please! Or an epilogue? Happy Writings!
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Reviewed By: SISTERINLAW19 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2008 19:16 CST
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hell iwant to be selfish too is there a sequel?
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2008 05:13 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Tell me this is no the end you have more chapters comming I would love to see what would happen next please.
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Reviewed By: BoxingKing [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2008 14:08 CST
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Wow! That was great! This is the first one I have read of you, and it was awesome! You detailed their problems so well, giving life to them and making the audience sympathize. I loved how the two interacted together. It was so sweet and bittersweet. I wish there would be more. I would love to see a continuation of some sort, an ending, seeing them get together, the wedding, the ok Keiko, the resolved past, etc. etc. etc. That would be awesome. But at the same time, this is awesome as it is. I love it! Keep up the good work, you are going on my favorites list! ~BoxingKing
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Reviewed By: Kagome4Hiei [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2008 12:11 CST
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oh that was good!
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Reviewed By: Golden_Fire_Goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2008 02:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really good. You shouldn't have this as a one-shot. There are so many ways that this can go... okay, on second though - leave it. This way it leaves the reader to come up with their own conclusions. But this is a nice way of presenting things - I never would have thought of either of them having problems like this, everything seemed to click for the both of them. Yuusuke would have Keiko there as his pillar - which she has been the entire time of the series. And Kagome, well, since the anime and manga got away from the romance possibility - it's hard to say. But I like your version too! And it makes for a great opening for a long cross-over fic. Good job.
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2008 02:01 CST
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Niiice. A chance meeting, two kindred spirits, and a whole new future awaits. Excellent job!!
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