| "Daughter of Mine" Reviews/Comments [ 27 ] |
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Reviewed By: gaaras_joker [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2008 14:46 CDT
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U HAVE GOT TO WRIGHT THE SEQUAL ASAP!!!!!!this is like the best fanfic about itachi i have read n a while and i actually cried when her friend died!!!!!
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Reviewed By: MrsJoey Wheeler [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2008 15:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was such a cute end to the story!!! I loved it!!!! You write with such....well....awesome imagination!!! hehe....Just work on your grammar and spelling for the sequel. Otherwise, everything else ROCKS!!
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Reviewed By: sonicrider14 On: April 29, 2008 16:23 CDT
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out of all the stories this is one of my favorites its coming out good cant wait till next chapter
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Reviewed By: sonicrider14 On: April 09, 2008 17:46 CDT
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nice chapter congrats on the 100 try to get more grades like that well i think your doing better then i am well anyway good chapter cant wait till the next one
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Reviewed By: sonicrider14 On: April 01, 2008 15:51 CDT
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in the last chapter i knew she was with itachi all the time because of that stupid ponytail anyway nice chapter try to get better grades
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Reviewed By: SmilezPeepz [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2008 19:18 CDT
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i can't believe aiko was with itachi! i found it obvious before, but with dei-chan, shark dude, and tobi around i was like whoa!!! i wonder how it'll be when she wakes up??
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Reviewed By: sonicrider14 On: March 21, 2008 15:17 CDT
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sorry i haven't reviewed in a few days i've been busy with super smash bros brawl and couldn't get on the computer so i've been really busy with that anyway chapter was good try to get more chapters like that one
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Reviewed By: Magami [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2008 21:55 CDT
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Oh no!! Ichiro dies!!! No shiznity... Well that sucks.. Umm, go Daddy for taking her awayu from the painful situation though. You are carrying it along at a nice pace, and it has really become enjoyable, and the drama is great, as any good story needs to have tear jerkers to pull at your wits and twist you around the plot.
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Reviewed By: sonicrider14 On: March 11, 2008 14:38 CDT
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nice chapter a little too much drama but it was good your really improving on writing those chapters keep it up please
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Reviewed By: MrsJoey Wheeler [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2008 14:22 CDT
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This is the first Ita/Sak I've read and it's great!!! Keep writing because it's getting really good and I'm sure you'll make it amazing!!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: sonicrider14 On: March 07, 2008 15:09 CST
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god im gonna flip out i feel like im gonna murder someone *murders myself* try to write a new chapter please *dies*
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Reviewed By: sonicrider14 On: March 04, 2008 19:21 CST
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it takes 10 days to not write a new chapter? thats just sad ._. please try to make a new chapter
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Reviewed By: sonicrider14 On: February 27, 2008 13:02 CST
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this story keeps getting better and better please try to update as fast as you can
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Reviewed By: sonicrider14 On: February 26, 2008 13:32 CST
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alright back in action i see keep it up and you will see more reviews
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Reviewed By: Magami [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2008 19:35 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice story, and I am glad to have found it. The great edge of depression in it at the moment will make the resolution ((if there is one)) sweeter. Or if you decide to kill everyone off, it will still be okay because it is nicely written, and it will have readers ((myself included)) begging for more. Keep it up, and I can't wait to see your next chapter. Very nice style of writing, and though it's rather short, it is just down to the point.
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