| "The Perfect Computer" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Title: Something
Reviewed By: calvinandhobbes On: January 15, 2009 08:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You've got a captivating story coupled with a near perfect ability to describe with sensory details. It was a bit hard to follow at points but I enjoyed how your characters grew and how you described their thoughts and emotions as the story unfolded. I do have a question about the science though: When Roxas comes back, it's not just a clone with his memories right? Leon just put him in a new body? Interesting altogether.
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Title: why?!
Reviewed By: Kumiko67 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2008 01:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHy!!! This story is great, I really like it, but why have u stopped writing it? T___T Why!? are you going to keep on writing or should I add this to the list of dropped fanfics? :(
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Reviewed By: aussieman000 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2008 07:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
CLAPCLAP RITE MOAR! But seriously. I was looking for some quick fap material before i went to bed. What I got was a thoroughly interesting read.
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Title: contemplate
Reviewed By: chuchan On: April 16, 2008 13:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You do have speliing errors but they don't realy hinder the progression of my enjoyment. I do wish though that you would update more, and your chapters would not keep us readers in so much suspence. And i would really like it if you did continu your story of FF.net, even if it dose have to be edited. I just feel like not many people are finding it here at this site.
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Title: Meh
Reviewed By: LuvaBunny [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2008 19:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
While I did enjoy enjoy your re-telling of Chobits with a Kingdom Hearts twist I have to admit that with the typos along with the jerky plot I kinda gave up. Not saying that this isn't a good fic..I mean it's better than most but I think you can do better with your spell-check and plot progression. ^_^ But don't take this the wrong way 'kay! Lots of peguins named Squid >,
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Title: Another fine chaper
Reviewed By: Kinzoko [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2008 04:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As the title suggests, another fine chapter indeed. The story is progressing nicely and i can't wait to see how it all ends. The detail you put into explaining the who computer/human part is perfect. I can only imagine how much time you must spend thinking this stuff up. You really should be proud of this Fanfic. I believe that it should have many more readers. Keep it up and i can't wait for chapter 12!
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Reviewed By: bcz [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2008 16:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Chapter 10: phew... i spent like 5 mintutes looking where i can leave a review!! lol Quite a lot of typos in this chapter unfortunately, i think it's just because u typed the key next to the one intended so it's not serious. Mmm... seems Sora still has some memories of Roxas left... interesting... looking forward to what is gonna happen. Also was the dream Sora had something from the past or something else? Looking to how it's going to turn out!! On other notes, Leon explained about Cloud that's some good info about a potential female Cloud... wait... if only male DNA mix well with machines... does that mean Namine is a guy as well!?!? shocking... what have u got up ur sleeves, dear author? Update soon!! xxx
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Title: Please write more!!!!
Reviewed By: Kinzoko [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2008 14:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is so gripping that i find myself checking to see if you have updated like every 5 hours. The cliff hangers leave me thinking of how you are going to take the fic to the next level. You've portrayed the characters really well and the whole plot line so far is FANTASTIC!!! Really well done for this ingenious fanfic I would be really happy to see it completed, as there are not many decent Sora/Roxas fics. Once again very well done Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: Doogles On: February 07, 2008 16:28 CST
Comment/Review:
AHHHHHHHHHHHH! I NEED MORE!!!!
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