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| "The Assassin's Seduction" Reviews/Comments [ 41 ] | | Pages (3): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 ] | Reviewed By: animeangel47 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2008 18:00 EST
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this is great keep writing
| Reviewed By: Ethril Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2008 23:51 EST
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my...god...how much would I have to PAY you to write a sequel chapter?
| Reviewed By: theblackangels_ [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2008 19:18 EST
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weird and shocking. but ok. ~TBA~
| Reviewed By: T-Pot On: January 11, 2008 13:27 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I too would like to read a sequel maybe just one for now but I love your imagination so please continue writing!
| Reviewed By: sweetest angel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2008 12:22 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that's a really great one-shot! you are really gifted,... pure Shadow's work!! *grin* If one day you have the idea to write some sequel about this story, that could be really really cool! When the end arrive, you are just left screaming for more... *blush* *cough, cough* or so to speak. *clear my throat* Seriously, I liked the beginning in the chatroom and all and the end when we can see Sess's side and the discovery of the real identity of the 'shikomiko'...absolutely "grandiose"!!! *applause* I can just thank you for this gift for us, humble readers, and bow low at you! take care and hope to read more of your fabulous works soon, my favorite author! *grin* For the moment, I'm going to take a cold shower!
| Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2008 16:56 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I usually don't go for Sess/Kag pairings, because generally speaking, they just seems out of character to me. However, the "Kagome's trapped in the future, and everyone else is long dead except Sesshoumaru" scenario is definitely the most realistic approach. I also loved the chatroom scene from the beginning; very realistic when it comes to the asinine activities in most chatrooms, and it made me laugh. The lemon was VERY well done, and I agree with the general consensus that the way you ended the story just begs for a sequel. If you wanted to leave this as a stand-alone story, I think you could, as it's obvious enough that in one fashion or another, they will be getting together. However, if you were to make a sequel, you could definitely count me in among those who would eagerly read it.
| Reviewed By: MichiruAOZ [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2008 12:21 EST
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Oh WOW!!! Ummm, yeah, I am seriously in need of a cold drink or something now! That was great!!! Talk bout hot 'n steamy... Whew! I definitely think you could follow this one up, there are many avenues it could follow. Don't think this is quite what Mama had in mind when she made the recommendation on using the net for her search (hehehe hentai smirk), but she could still possibly get her answers from Sess... Oh the ways to get those answers, some easy some not so much... Anywho good luck and again would love to see this expanded..
| Reviewed By: xstephaniex [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2008 11:17 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a great one shot. I think you could do more like this or continue this story.
| Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2008 06:50 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I'm a total perv and I'm not ashamed to admit it. I didn't follow the instructions cause I wasn't sure if it would be good enough to bother, but it would have been... **bookmark** That was seriously the hottest chatroom stuff I have EVER read... ok, not that I read a lot of that kind of thing.. but I have seen some here and there and they weren't all that great. I never went into a chat that was set up for that kind of thing, but I used to chat a lot and it can get really perverted in those places. I do think that Kagome might have been a little too good at the fellatio thing for not having done it, but maybe we can blame that on exposure to Japan's popular culture or whatever you want to call it. OMG, I can just imagine the shock Kagome must feel once reading her own name on the screen! It begs, absolutely BEGS for you to write another part to this... and maybe they can meet at the God Tree... and try it for real.. or go for coffee or something... and then try it for real... Or Kagome could start screaming during her freak-out that she met the Ice Lord online and her family comes in and sees just how pure the miko is, haha! Ok, that's a stupid idea, but it amuses me for the moment. It wouldn't really go anywhere... that's why I'm not a writer... maybe I'll write someday, but not yet. I did kind of foresee the whole name thing at the end and I am so glad that you did that! If it was supposed to be a shocker, don't worry, I usually "spoil" a good story for myself by realizing the best way to end it somewhere in the middle of reading it. Either I'm psychic or just really good at putting the pieces together... haven't figured that one out yet... maybe I should have just said that if I had written this, that's how I would have ended it. Hmmm... I think maybe I might have gotten my enthusiasm across by now... and maybe I really should post this anonymously! lol Oh, well liking the story this much can't be any worse than having written it and I know I am big enough a perv (though lacking the tallent) to have written it, so I might as well own it(the pervertedness...).
| Reviewed By: ji-an [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2008 03:41 EST
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I usually don't read Kagome and Sesshoumaru fan fics because there is NO chemisty between them, but this was SO funny I couldn't resist! I LOVED IT! Online chats couldn't be anymore perverted.
| Reviewed By: ladydeath31178 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2008 02:14 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice!!! I would love to see this as a possible story not just a one shot though *pouts * just cause I'm 9 months along doesnt mean I cant be a hentai too!!! but anywho since an ice bath is out of the question I'll go wake the old husband *grins*
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