| "The Assassin's Seduction" Reviews/Comments [ 41 ] |
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Reviewed By: Shariramora On: March 04, 2011 08:19 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
=.= I can't believe there's no chapter 3...... I enjoyed it a little too much and to realize there's no next button T.T, it was like enjoying an exquisite meal and all of a sudden you bit your tongue. I wish there's a sequel. Great writing, absolutely amazing and original too!! Just awesome |
Title: The Assassin's Seduction
Reviewed By: Maddie50 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2010 21:51 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A clever, entertaining, erotic tale. I have read it before and I just wanted to read it again. Maddie50
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Reviewed By: kanna37 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2009 03:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! This one was really good, I have to say I really enjoyed this litle fic... in fact, i'd have loved to see more of it. What a way for them to find each other after so long, Really, really creative. Amber
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Reviewed By: Lone saiyan woman (not signed in) On: July 12, 2009 06:54 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
absolutely amazing, i dont usually review fiction on this sit but i had to comment. If there is anyway I could get/force you to continue this i would be the happiest camper alive :) but alas ill settle for this beautifully written fiction
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Reviewed By: De On: January 03, 2009 21:45 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
1)I think this is the hottest thing I've ever read. Whoo boy, Sesshy just gets better with age doesn't he? I LOVE the little internet twist you put in this, and I wonder exactly how many of the people in the chatroom were MWBs or DIDs. And 2) where can I find the other stories you've written? C'mon, I know you've squirreled them away somewhere that I NEED to find. I must have them all, so y'know.... I can live vicariously through your writing. Read - smut, I need your smut.
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Reviewed By: Sansho On: May 13, 2008 11:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! Such a good story! Naughty, but written so well...Thank you for such a good story...lol I was so sad when I found out that it was a one-shot! Ah well, Untill you next amazing story... ~X~ Sansho ~X~
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Title: Another review
Reviewed By: inukaglover815 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2008 09:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know that I have probably, no definetly written a review for this before, but last night I was looking for something interesting to read and decided that I wanted to read this again for the umpteeth time. And in addition to whatever I have written in previous reviews I just wanted to say that I long for a sequel. But I will not ask you to write one. I understand having people send you reviews that demand for a sequel when you only intended it for what it is and nothing more. Plus you have already expanded once, do ask you to expand again might cause you to write yourself into a corner from which you can never return. But I loved the originality of this story. It wasn't like the other "kagome gets stuck in her time....meets Sess and then falls madly in love with him because he looks like Inu." ^_^ Awsome job! I always love reading your work.
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Reviewed By: Kanna Mizuo Megami On: April 02, 2008 21:26 EDT
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MY GOODNESS!!! I love this story so very much. The lemon part was very well done and the whole idea and plot line was unique and kept me reading (I skipped dinner to finish). I love that Sessomaru is so passionate and needing of Kagome and that she in turn also needs and wants him. Over all this is definitely I story I would read again. Kanna P.S. If you ever get the chance or the inspiration please write something else like this. A short story with an amazing plot.
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Title: Angelstoxickiss
Reviewed By: Angelstoxickiss [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2008 04:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't normally review, unless a story really catches my eye, but i've read several of your stories on FF and I absolutely love your style of writing. Vying for Dominance is quickly becoming my favorite fic. Wonderful job! May the smut live on!
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2008 07:06 EDT
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this is good but i want more. does she meet any other of her youkai friends like shippo & kouga? what does her family think of sess? please write more
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Reviewed By: RadioActiveRedhead [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2008 14:37 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dang, this story is every internet geek's fantasy. I love it! I don't think I've read a story with this sort of idea that was actually good. All the other's were "Kagome meets him online, then they go to school together, then they have sex" bleh. Good job this is interesting. A cop? That's a nice change. He's usually a business man. I like the cop idea. Ughh I need to read more. I'm a sucker for good perverted-ness. And you write it so well. ;)
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Reviewed By: De On: March 10, 2008 20:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVED this fic. Although it did have a repeated theme (Kagome gets stranded on her side of the well only to meet someon from her past) I loved this new twist on it. Although sometimes Seshoumaru comes across as... a little OOC it's in an enjoyable way. Like porn. That's always enjoyable. ;) Maybe think about writing a sequel? I burst out laughing anytime I think about Kagome trying to handle a modern-day Sess. LMFAO
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Reviewed By: blackjack.17 On: March 08, 2008 12:28 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was one of the best Sess/Kags oneshots EVER! I think I might need to take a cold shower. I know that you said that you didn't want to do anymore, but you seriously should. It was really good, but I'm glad that you added that extra chapter. I just love it when Sesshomaru talks dirty.
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Title: WHOA!
Reviewed By: inukaglover815 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2008 09:58 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! I read this last night before I went to sleep and I just have to say....WOW! this was sooooo good it kept me up an extra hour after I was done reading it. The story kept playing over in my head and I just wanted to read it again....in fact I just might do that. XD i even suggested it to one of my roommates. XD I hope to read more of your stuff in the near future
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Reviewed By: ingidoo On: January 29, 2008 03:15 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVE! I love it! Couple dumb typos here and there (like i care?) but it was absolutely great. So fantastically naughty! Sometimes I find myself bored with the same 'ol smut, but your sexy scenes bring back the heat! :0P I liked how you delved into Sess's reasons for being crazy about her, it made it more realistic and brought out the flow. Overall, it was very enjoyable. :0)
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