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Reviewed By: koyla On: March 14, 2008 03:18 EDT
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OMG what a great story! keep it up, and i'll drool over it lol
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2008 00:49 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice chapter. I like the slow building of trust and information that you are doing right now. They are strangers and don't know if the other is trustworthy so they should not be blurting all their secrets right away. This seems to be developing into a story that I am going to enjoy.
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Reviewed By: Gin Blossom On: March 14, 2008 00:23 EDT
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While I'm a definite Inu/Kags fan, this version of Inuyasha seems much more similar to Sessh! Either way, I'm enjoying this version of the fairytale! Thanks for updating!
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Reviewed By: inugoat On: March 13, 2008 23:39 EDT
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Aww, I wanted Kagome to see his face. Are Shippo and the rest of the gang going to appear in this?
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2008 21:38 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nice update... interesting developments... at least they know each others name... can't wait when kagome meets the others in the castle... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2008 20:57 EDT
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family illness and other chaos has caused me to be remiss in my reviews, please forgive. . . you are depicting yasha as a rather large individual although i guess from a small woman's perspective, even one who is of average size could seem intimidating. one could only imagine being in a similar frightening situation but your kagome shows no fear, only an insatiable curiosity and a defiantly strong will. . . eloquently written and wonderfully described. i am truly enjoying your story. ~ delighted, ginny
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Title: Lovely story
Reviewed By: Rihannon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2008 18:58 EDT
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I see a lot of potential in this story, hope you update soon!
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Reviewed By: GinBlossom On: February 19, 2008 12:42 EST
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I feel like this story suddenly veered in another direction! Great imagery, though. I'm really looking forward to the next couple of chapters.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2008 00:13 EST
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lovely story. your depiction of the night she was taken to the castle, the attitude of the crowd, the grounds around the walls, etc... exquisitely detailed and stirring. i shall be looking forward to reading more. ~ thank you, ginny
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Reviewed By: Sassa, too lazy to log in On: February 17, 2008 06:12 EST
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Oh, this is beautiful! No immediate love on first sight business or other, just calmly calculation of the situation and acting reasonably out of it. There's a wet cold child in his care; let's make sure she gets warm and stays healthy. Her life was threatened but now it's not; however the situation is quite unknown to her and she'd better be on her toes just in case. Logical. BEAUTIFUL! And I do hope that nursemaid was some Kaede-hint. In fanfictions, she tends to shine more in both the manga and the anime. I'll be reading you!
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Title: Hmm
Reviewed By: blackr0s3 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2008 01:22 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. I never knew something could be so short and so interesting at the same time lol... I'm eager for the next chapter, such a unique "Beauty and the Beast" plot. Hope to read more soon! =]
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2008 00:24 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes our captor should introduce himself to Kagome. I like how you maintain the suspense of who it is and start to develop the relationship between him and Kagome. Why do I think the nursemaid that is still there is Kaede? I am looking forward to the next update.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2008 00:24 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... kagome was the sacrifice but she doesn't know who took her in the castle... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: Kakashisgurly [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2008 00:15 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, this is a great plot you got going on here. I hope you can update soon!
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Title: Interesting
Reviewed By: blackr0s3 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2008 11:04 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh wow, this sure is something new. It kept me entertained and now I'm curious.I hope to read more, this really is original, I honestly never read anything like it. Please update soon...I'll just be waiting for another addition to this creative piece. xoxo~abby A new fan.
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