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Title: Hmm
Reviewed By: blackr0s3 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2008 01:22 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. I never knew something could be so short and so interesting at the same time lol... I'm eager for the next chapter, such a unique "Beauty and the Beast" plot. Hope to read more soon! =]
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2008 00:24 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes our captor should introduce himself to Kagome. I like how you maintain the suspense of who it is and start to develop the relationship between him and Kagome. Why do I think the nursemaid that is still there is Kaede? I am looking forward to the next update.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2008 00:24 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... kagome was the sacrifice but she doesn't know who took her in the castle... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: Kakashisgurly [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2008 00:15 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, this is a great plot you got going on here. I hope you can update soon!
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Title: Interesting
Reviewed By: blackr0s3 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2008 11:04 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh wow, this sure is something new. It kept me entertained and now I'm curious.I hope to read more, this really is original, I honestly never read anything like it. Please update soon...I'll just be waiting for another addition to this creative piece. xoxo~abby A new fan.
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Reviewed By: Sassa [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2008 06:16 EST
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Ah. A compassionate "monster" with insight of his own condition! An intelligent beast! THAT approach I like (talking with Yoda). I wonder whether Kagome will be keen on knowing and understanding her "capturer" or not; we have not seen much of her personality as of yet. And whom might that be luring in the shadows? Shippou, perhaps? That might be fun! I'll be reading you!
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Reviewed By: Persephone of Abydos On: January 19, 2008 02:24 EST
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I like this. It's a more unique take than the other Beauty & the Beast storylines out there.
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Reviewed By: Akihana [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2008 03:47 EST
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This is very original! I like it quite a bit. The beginning was a little short, but it was very catching and well written, with plenty of suspense. I love it when people bring in non-Japanese cultural references, because it makes a story feel more rich without being canon. Good job, and I hope to see more!
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2008 15:52 EST
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Ooooh, you have me hooked, Blue. Gotta know more. Who's the guy in the castle, and how easy is this relationship going to be? Will Kouga get his own, and the 'monster' be redeemed? So glad to have a story from you!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2008 14:07 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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interesting story... would the lady sacrifice be kagome?... is this an inuyasha/kagome pairing?... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you... hope you update your other stories too... HAPPY NEW YEAR!
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2008 12:14 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Intriguing beginning, I can't wait to see what happens next.
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2008 07:48 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good start. i really like the plot you set up. I look forward to seeing what you do with it.
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Reviewed By: youkaineko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2008 07:31 EST
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Been a long time since you posted anything. I'm hoping this means you are back. Anyway this looks interesting. Kouga is human, or at least appears so. I'm guessing that our favorite hanyou will not be having his lovely ears then? Pity, we all love those ears.
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Reviewed By: scherezade [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2008 07:25 EST
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Oh please continue!! I am already intrigued by your different take on the Beauty and the Beast theme and interested in seeing how you continue with your European setting. As long as there is plenty of yummy Inu-Kag, I will eagerly await each chapter.
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Reviewed By: Sassa [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2008 07:20 EST
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Fairytales have been used before, but I like this tragic approach with Kouga as a major villain, not so much murderous as ice-cold (which in my eyes is worse). That makes me hope this'll be a story of struggle, of slow comprehension, something in the lines of beauty and beast but without the singing (I still haven't gotten over that: did you hear? She's hungry! Let's SING! Ok, they feed Belle as well, but STILL...) I eagerly await the next chapter.
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