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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2008 07:55 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nice update... slowly but surely... inuyasha is quite mysterious... wonder what other reactions kagome will have... who else will she meet... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: Desdemona_s_Ghost [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2008 00:57 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, honestly, I really was drawn into the story. its interesting to see Kouga in such a way, and to place the other characters in such roles. I really enjoyed the style in which you wrote, everything was very rich and descriptive. Please continue making more!!
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Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2008 07:46 EDT
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I'm letting you know because you can't tell by my outward appearance but I am positively dancing in circles and sqealing in delight (my girly romantic side anyway!) From the looks of it you are on your way to pumping out a new masterpiece; I will gladly purchase a VIP ticket & a backstage pass for this ride. Everything was so beautiful I can't correctly describe it. Your writing style, the characters, the plot so far...I love them all. And I'm not sure why (probably because you take such pride & care in what you post) but I know I'm reading a fan fic but I keep forgeting it's not an actual romance novel. Keep it up! Oh yeah, great work on the time period. *proud historical romance reader* It's the little touches that sell it.
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Reviewed By: Josie n the PCats [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2008 22:36 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your writing is amazing! I am hooked to the screen when I'm reading this story. While I'm disappointed by the short chapters, I know I will anxiously wait for as long as it takes for the next chapter to be released. Great Work!
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Reviewed By: Sassa, too lazy to log in On: March 14, 2008 18:13 EDT
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I love the formal language Inuyasha's using. I also love the fact that you allow him to be the elder in both manners and thinking. I have always disliked the twisted motherly aspect of Kagome, the one where she thinks she has the right to try to improve or alter Inuyasha's manners. It's too much displayed in the anime at least, so this is a relief. I'll be reading you!
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Reviewed By: koyla On: March 14, 2008 03:18 EDT
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OMG what a great story! keep it up, and i'll drool over it lol
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2008 00:49 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice chapter. I like the slow building of trust and information that you are doing right now. They are strangers and don't know if the other is trustworthy so they should not be blurting all their secrets right away. This seems to be developing into a story that I am going to enjoy.
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Reviewed By: Gin Blossom On: March 14, 2008 00:23 EDT
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While I'm a definite Inu/Kags fan, this version of Inuyasha seems much more similar to Sessh! Either way, I'm enjoying this version of the fairytale! Thanks for updating!
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Reviewed By: inugoat On: March 13, 2008 23:39 EDT
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Aww, I wanted Kagome to see his face. Are Shippo and the rest of the gang going to appear in this?
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2008 21:38 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nice update... interesting developments... at least they know each others name... can't wait when kagome meets the others in the castle... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2008 20:57 EDT
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family illness and other chaos has caused me to be remiss in my reviews, please forgive. . . you are depicting yasha as a rather large individual although i guess from a small woman's perspective, even one who is of average size could seem intimidating. one could only imagine being in a similar frightening situation but your kagome shows no fear, only an insatiable curiosity and a defiantly strong will. . . eloquently written and wonderfully described. i am truly enjoying your story. ~ delighted, ginny
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Title: Lovely story
Reviewed By: Rihannon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2008 18:58 EDT
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I see a lot of potential in this story, hope you update soon!
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Reviewed By: GinBlossom On: February 19, 2008 12:42 EST
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I feel like this story suddenly veered in another direction! Great imagery, though. I'm really looking forward to the next couple of chapters.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2008 00:13 EST
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lovely story. your depiction of the night she was taken to the castle, the attitude of the crowd, the grounds around the walls, etc... exquisitely detailed and stirring. i shall be looking forward to reading more. ~ thank you, ginny
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Reviewed By: Sassa, too lazy to log in On: February 17, 2008 06:12 EST
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Oh, this is beautiful! No immediate love on first sight business or other, just calmly calculation of the situation and acting reasonably out of it. There's a wet cold child in his care; let's make sure she gets warm and stays healthy. Her life was threatened but now it's not; however the situation is quite unknown to her and she'd better be on her toes just in case. Logical. BEAUTIFUL! And I do hope that nursemaid was some Kaede-hint. In fanfictions, she tends to shine more in both the manga and the anime. I'll be reading you!
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