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Reviewed By: dreamer778 On: April 27, 2008 19:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVE IT!!!!! oh m y god i cant wait to see what happens next!
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Title: Perfect TEN!
Reviewed By: blackr0s3 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2008 11:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I swear I love this even more after every chapter! x] Update soon, yes? Pleaseeee?x] I need to read more on what happens next! And is Kagome really that young? He keeps acting like he's some kinda phedopile when he feels anything for her.
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2008 07:55 EDT
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Good chapter. The sexual tension between these two is sky high. I can't wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2008 06:36 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... glad that kagome is doing fine in inuyasha's castle... like the bond between kagome & rin - really cute... seems that kagome still hasn't figured inuyasha out... he keeps surprising her wth his actions... wonder what happens next... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2008 02:37 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the way the relationship is developing between Kagome and Inuyasha. I am starting to wonder what wrenches you are planning on throwing into the way though. Kagome is accepting Inuyasha in all ways and unless something comes up they will be in love and showing it very soon. Kagome already admires Inuyasha for his treatment of the people on his property. It won't be difficult for her to love him. I am looking forward to what you plan on next.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu not at home On: April 18, 2008 01:11 EDT
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i had already written something witty and relevant but alas, my sister's computer decided to restart the browser before i could properly submit the intelligently complimentary review that i promptly forgot. who remembers things that they believe will be saved somewhere safe, i sure don't. now i am very tired and need to go to sleep so i can get up at 5am to take my sister to the airport without wrecking or getting lost by falling asleep behind the wheel. so, please just pretend that this says something humorous about yasha bathing the girl who was dumped on his draw bridge and something about it was nice of him to purchase clothes for her and ask after her treatment. i did enjoy reading this chapter and sorry i couldn't think of what i had originally written. ~ thank you, ginny
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Reviewed By: animeangel47 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2008 22:03 EDT
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this is great i can't wait to see what happens next please update soon
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Reviewed By: Gin Blossom On: April 17, 2008 21:04 EDT
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Thanks for updating. You're certainly keeping us intrigued!
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Reviewed By: Akihana [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2008 04:33 EDT
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I really like this story so far! My only complaint would be that it is moving very slowly, but that's something that's hard to change, because it is dictated by your schedule. I can wish though. I really like this new take, the originality and exploration of the characters. Great job!
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Title: Perfet 10
Reviewed By: blackr0s3 (not logged in) On: March 20, 2008 02:10 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Never once did I lose interest, which for me is hard to say about anything actually. I really can not wait till the next update! Inuyasha's attraction towards Kagome made me laugh, it was just funny for some reason. Please update as soon as you can!
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Reviewed By: caitypeach22 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2008 19:45 EDT
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This story is truly magnificent! I adore the historical details and the description of the Moors. You've really capture the landscape of a great romance! Inu's character is breath taking; I do so love how he has conversed with Kagome. I am anxious to read the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: star555555528 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2008 16:41 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow this is really good!!! I like how you have Inuyasha already starting to fall for Kagome!!! Hopefully it will turn into more then lust. Kouga is a bastard!!! Anyway keep up the amazing writing.
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Reviewed By: Midoriko-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2008 16:40 EDT
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Oh, another one so soon, that's great! I don't even mind that it's not as long as you usually pit them - it came so close to the other one, that it's a great treat!
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2008 14:39 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice how Inuyasha is already falling for Kagome even though she just came into his life. It may be just lust now,, but if I know you it will develop into love soon enough. I like how you have Kouga a part of Inuyasha's life already and trying to steal it. It is good to see Shippo's introduction to the story too. I can't wait to see where this story goes next.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2008 12:25 EDT
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an attraction... no, not her willfulness and spirit, not that at all. interesting. the loss of power, kouga's history in relation to his. the lengths he goes to to remain anonymous. ~ a pleasure, ginny
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