| "Who are you and what have you done with Sasuke?" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Reviewed By: SilverStar87 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2008 21:27 CST
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Well that was ummm... very interesting. It completely caught me off gaurd with that situation. Good show though. Can't wait to see what happens next!
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Reviewed By: SilverStar87 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2008 21:09 CST
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Another funny chapter! I like Naruto's logic in date material lol. How long will it take for Naruto to connect the facts?
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Reviewed By: SilverStar87 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2008 20:45 CST
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So it was Sasuke! That's hilarious! I couldn't stop laughing from begining to end. Can't wait to see what happens next!
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Reviewed By: SilverStar87 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2008 19:57 CST
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Good chap! I wonder who the girl is? I almost wanna say it's Sasuke using the sexy-jutsu but that would be too funny.
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Reviewed By: SilverStar87 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2008 19:46 CST
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Good second chapter too! Sasuke being pinned down by Naruto is cute. Can't wait to get to the next chap.
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Reviewed By: SilverStar87 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2008 19:34 CST
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That was a good first chapter. What's up with the hairpins? Can't wait to read more!
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Title: Chapter 5!!
Reviewed By: Flaming Jello On: February 28, 2008 00:17 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg! this is a really good story, but i'd have to say you need more descriptions during your dialogue. your thoughts seem to jump from place to place and its a little harder to stay with it. but for a first, THIS IS AMAZING!! it would help considerably to write either longer chapters or post more chapters... one of the two... thanks for the fun read!
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Reviewed By: buzzk97 On: February 17, 2008 13:23 CST
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PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!
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Title: chappie 5
Reviewed By: white_rabbit [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2008 21:30 CST
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all i have to say is....MORE!!!!!!!!! P.S. and please say that Kyuubi's little 'show' does happen. in all its lemony goodness
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Title: I think i know who the girl is!
Reviewed By: KawaiiKoneko89*not logged in* On: February 01, 2008 13:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have a feeling that the girl from the training grounds is Sasuke...those weird items from the Uchiha basement caused it...just a guess though. =^^=
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Reviewed By: princesssirenity2000 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2008 20:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
eeeek! XD *huggles* this is awesome!!!!!!!!!*pounces you* i can't wait for this to finish either!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: MasterTDragon On: January 27, 2008 14:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
IT's good,but you want a suggestion PICK IT UP. Your story is nearly to the point of boring me to death pick it up! Good though and please continue.
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Reviewed By: MoonLiteLeaves On: January 23, 2008 17:37 CST
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Great story. If you still need a beta I'm interested. You can contact me at apatheticwhitemoon@yahoo.com. Also if any one is interested I'm looking for people to rp with (obviously yaoi.)
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Reviewed By: white_rabbit [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2008 17:18 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
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I liked it. I'll be your beta if you like. On the site here I'm: white_rabbit drop me a line if you want me to beta for you.
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Title: ello
Reviewed By: MaskOfMe [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2008 21:53 CST
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well written, ja ne
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