| "Who are you and what have you done with Sasuke?" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Reviewed By: B D Gerretson [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2008 02:05 CDT
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awesome! update soon I was so waiting for it!
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Reviewed By: SilverStar87 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2008 22:17 CDT
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*squees like a fan girl* Yet another great chapter! You kept the two in character but still changed them enough to the point it was totally believable. It was a good lemon too! I can't wait for the next chapter! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: princesssirenity2000 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2008 20:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*blush* =^,^= yuuummy.....really yummy.....
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Reviewed By: Harkura On: March 14, 2008 20:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^^ I would have reviewed earlier but I didn't know I could without an account. lol I don't read a whole lot on this site. Anyway, I loves the fic, first one I've seen like this. I understand about going back and re-reading lemons, it can get embaressing to spell check, I've written a few myself and usually skip over them when I spell check my work. ANYWAY...keep up the good work, I'll look forward to more! update soon! ^^
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Reviewed By: Flaming Jello [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2008 01:17 CST
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I loved it! (again) and, like before, YOU NEED LONGER CHAPTERS!!! this gold is too precious to be spared!! please, for the sake of your readers, try!='D please... in other news though... wow!!! i totally thought there was going to be either a conflict or some lemon at the end of 6. but wow. very sly! loved it, update soon! ^.^
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Reviewed By: princesssirenity2000 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2008 21:06 CST
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MMMmmmmmm, i love the sound of things so far....*purrs*
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Reviewed By: SilverStar87 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2008 21:27 CST
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Well that was ummm... very interesting. It completely caught me off gaurd with that situation. Good show though. Can't wait to see what happens next!
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Reviewed By: SilverStar87 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2008 21:09 CST
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Another funny chapter! I like Naruto's logic in date material lol. How long will it take for Naruto to connect the facts?
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Reviewed By: SilverStar87 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2008 20:45 CST
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So it was Sasuke! That's hilarious! I couldn't stop laughing from begining to end. Can't wait to see what happens next!
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Reviewed By: SilverStar87 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2008 19:57 CST
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Good chap! I wonder who the girl is? I almost wanna say it's Sasuke using the sexy-jutsu but that would be too funny.
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Reviewed By: SilverStar87 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2008 19:46 CST
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Good second chapter too! Sasuke being pinned down by Naruto is cute. Can't wait to get to the next chap.
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Reviewed By: SilverStar87 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2008 19:34 CST
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That was a good first chapter. What's up with the hairpins? Can't wait to read more!
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Title: Chapter 5!!
Reviewed By: Flaming Jello On: February 28, 2008 00:17 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg! this is a really good story, but i'd have to say you need more descriptions during your dialogue. your thoughts seem to jump from place to place and its a little harder to stay with it. but for a first, THIS IS AMAZING!! it would help considerably to write either longer chapters or post more chapters... one of the two... thanks for the fun read!
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Reviewed By: buzzk97 On: February 17, 2008 13:23 CST
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PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!
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Title: chappie 5
Reviewed By: white_rabbit [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2008 21:30 CST
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all i have to say is....MORE!!!!!!!!! P.S. and please say that Kyuubi's little 'show' does happen. in all its lemony goodness
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