Reviewed By:JdWheels [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2008 23:53 CDT Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10
Comment/Review: This was a great story... a little scattered at times. This is not a flame... just a suggestion- write it out again, this time mor description and such. I wish I had written this though... I know how it would go in my mind. This was great though( Don't forget it)
Title: wow Reviewed By:Hikaru-RoseRed [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2008 23:44 CST Comment/Review: okay so that wasnt bad a little odd but not bad i liked the end best it was cute