| "Slow dancing in a burning room" Reviews/Comments [ 24 ] |
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Reviewed By: asialisek [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2008 00:44 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
waaaaaaaaaan **childish pout** and just as it got to the good part!~~~~~~~ **pouts more** Please add more soon!~~~~~~ **flails desperately** pleaaaase~~~~~
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Reviewed By: Tell-me-more On: February 08, 2008 16:58 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Could you include a dictionary??? I dont know what half the honerifics(i know thats not spelled right...) mean... Other than that, this is a great story. deffinitly grabbed my interest. I cant wait to read more!!!!
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Reviewed By: IDeathx [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2008 00:51 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Just Love This Fic!!Its So Awsome!^^Please Write More Soon!I Can Hardly Wait Till The Nex Chapter Somes Out!^^
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Reviewed By: Dream Keeper [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2008 19:53 EST
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Bum, bum, bah! And so, Sasuke and Naruto meet for the first time in seven years. Does Sasuke recognize Naruto in his disguise? Does Naruto do anything to give himself away? I guess I'll have to wait til next time! Keep up the great work! ^_^
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Reviewed By: princesssirenity2000 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2008 21:21 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
XD Ahhhh! you are soooooooooooooooo awesome!!!! *huggles* really, you are! i hope you finish it!!!!!! *Squeal* i can't wait!!!!!!!!
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Title: Keep it up!
Reviewed By: Poisoncage On: January 20, 2008 17:04 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fanfic is one of my favorites. I love how Haruhi develops throughout the story and how everything flows and sounds. Even though it contains Male-Preg (Which I dont usually read)the characters voices suit them well and it has good plot. I look forward to reading more of it in the future. XD ------------------ =+=+=+ ------------------ P.O.I.S.O.N.C.A.G.E
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Reviewed By: Dreamkeeper On: January 19, 2008 16:09 EST
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I liked this chapter. And I love that you added that song. I liked All Dogs Go to Heaven when I was younger too. In fact, I still own it. I thought it fit well. I can't wait to see how those two react to going back to Naruto's birth place. And what about Suske? Will he realize that she's his daughter? Update soon! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Dream Keeper [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2008 19:39 EST
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Ai-ya! Please update soon! I really like how you portray Naruto! Where did you come up with his daughters name? It's beautiful. Does Uchiha find the duo, or no? I hope that's not where you plan on leaving it! I eagerly await your update. ^_^
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Reviewed By: B On: January 12, 2008 16:45 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update! Update! Update! Soon! Soon! Soon! Please! Please! Please!
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