| "Slow dancing in a burning room" Reviews/Comments [ 24 ] |
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Title: Overwhelmed
Reviewed By: Kiraikan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2013 10:47 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is my first review on this site, and I am new here. I've been digging some SasuNaru fics and I've come across yours, and I'm a little bit sure that this is Naru/SasuNaru. And I liked it, very much. What overwhelmed me here was how you made the story flow, where the reader really felt that he or she was a part of the story; where I felt I was a front seat guest of a movie. Also, I am looking forward for the scene where Sasuke becomes the seme (hihiihi SasuNaru XD), and when Sasuke discovers his daughter. I really hope that you would continue this, but judging from the date of your last update, I think there would only be a slim chance of you continuing this. But really, Thank you so much for sharing this wonderful story :) |
Reviewed By: loopy911 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2008 22:56 EDT
Comment/Review:
im crying! i started reading this the day you updated chapter five and im like dieing for the next chapter i love your fanfic graet job
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Reviewed By: Tell-me-more On: April 23, 2008 16:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmyyyy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!! Sorry, love it, continue soon please!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: B D Gerretson [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2008 23:12 EDT
Comment/Review:
AHHH Don't wait that long between updates again!! LOL I nearly had a heartattack! lol loved it!!! update soon PLEASE!!!
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Title: Wow!
Reviewed By: bookwormloverjen [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2008 19:20 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
For some odd reason I want to shout out 'Yee-haw'. *blushes* I loved the chapter, really, and I can't wait to see what else happens to the 'happy little' family!
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Reviewed By: princesssirenity2000 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2008 16:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
XD *pounces you* Veeeeerrrrrrrrrrrrrry nice! Luv ya much!
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Reviewed By: blue wolf On: April 19, 2008 12:41 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was great i hope that keep up the good work. but i do have a ? was it naruto that gave birth so why was sasuke getting and not the other way around. great please up date soon.
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Reviewed By: harderfasterplease [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2008 19:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
amazing. Pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee keep going? I can't wait until the next one comes out so I can find out what Sasuke's reaction will be.
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Reviewed By: daedpricness On: April 09, 2008 13:56 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it pleace write more and just get to the hoootttttttt yaoii sex secn.
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Title: Update!
Reviewed By: Rose-Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2008 13:35 EDT
Comment/Review:
Please oh please write on! I loved the story, if you do not continue I will hunt you down and.... *Sasuke-a-like-death-glare* ~ be frightened, be very frightened ~ :3 WRITE MORE! PL-E-A-S-E!
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Title: Please continue.
Reviewed By: bookwormloverjen [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2008 00:39 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I do love this story. I can't wait to see what else happens. Please continue on.
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Reviewed By: princesssirenity2000 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2008 13:13 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, continuuuuue!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *pounces you* I love this story soooo much, and i can't wait anymore!!! *snuggles*
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Title: Chapter 4?
Reviewed By: Flaming Jello On: March 01, 2008 17:33 EST
Comment/Review:
I just have one question... WHY WOULD YOU DO THIS TO US?? This is such a great story, and it has the ability to suck you in, but this is no way to stop. I love your writing style and the fact that this fic actually gives you enough pages in one chapter to really get attached(i have the feeling thats spelled wrong e.e). Please update soon, I'll give you cookies!! hehe, yum. ^.^
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Reviewed By: The Lady Renyel On: March 01, 2008 12:50 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Th is is absolutely wonderful!!!!!update soon?
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Reviewed By: Kagome_forever [MediaMiner Member] On: February 29, 2008 13:25 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh Wow! I loved this story, and you leave us hanging at the good part....which sucks for us, but is btter for you because that means the enjoyment factor will sky rocket because of the anticipation. Anyway I can't wait for the next update! Ja Ne, Revine
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