| "Slow dancing in a burning room" Reviews/Comments [ 24 ] |
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Title: Update!
Reviewed By: Rose-Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2008 13:35 EDT
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Please oh please write on! I loved the story, if you do not continue I will hunt you down and.... *Sasuke-a-like-death-glare* ~ be frightened, be very frightened ~ :3 WRITE MORE! PL-E-A-S-E!
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Title: Please continue.
Reviewed By: bookwormloverjen [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2008 00:39 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I do love this story. I can't wait to see what else happens. Please continue on.
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Reviewed By: princesssirenity2000 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2008 13:13 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, continuuuuue!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *pounces you* I love this story soooo much, and i can't wait anymore!!! *snuggles*
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Title: Chapter 4?
Reviewed By: Flaming Jello On: March 01, 2008 17:33 EST
Comment/Review:
I just have one question... WHY WOULD YOU DO THIS TO US?? This is such a great story, and it has the ability to suck you in, but this is no way to stop. I love your writing style and the fact that this fic actually gives you enough pages in one chapter to really get attached(i have the feeling thats spelled wrong e.e). Please update soon, I'll give you cookies!! hehe, yum. ^.^
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Reviewed By: The Lady Renyel On: March 01, 2008 12:50 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Th is is absolutely wonderful!!!!!update soon?
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Reviewed By: Kagome_forever [MediaMiner Member] On: February 29, 2008 13:25 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh Wow! I loved this story, and you leave us hanging at the good part....which sucks for us, but is btter for you because that means the enjoyment factor will sky rocket because of the anticipation. Anyway I can't wait for the next update! Ja Ne, Revine
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Reviewed By: asialisek [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2008 00:44 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
waaaaaaaaaan **childish pout** and just as it got to the good part!~~~~~~~ **pouts more** Please add more soon!~~~~~~ **flails desperately** pleaaaase~~~~~
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Reviewed By: Tell-me-more On: February 08, 2008 16:58 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Could you include a dictionary??? I dont know what half the honerifics(i know thats not spelled right...) mean... Other than that, this is a great story. deffinitly grabbed my interest. I cant wait to read more!!!!
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Reviewed By: IDeathx [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2008 00:51 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Just Love This Fic!!Its So Awsome!^^Please Write More Soon!I Can Hardly Wait Till The Nex Chapter Somes Out!^^
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Reviewed By: Dream Keeper [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2008 19:53 EST
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Bum, bum, bah! And so, Sasuke and Naruto meet for the first time in seven years. Does Sasuke recognize Naruto in his disguise? Does Naruto do anything to give himself away? I guess I'll have to wait til next time! Keep up the great work! ^_^
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Reviewed By: princesssirenity2000 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2008 21:21 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
XD Ahhhh! you are soooooooooooooooo awesome!!!! *huggles* really, you are! i hope you finish it!!!!!! *Squeal* i can't wait!!!!!!!!
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Title: Keep it up!
Reviewed By: Poisoncage On: January 20, 2008 17:04 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fanfic is one of my favorites. I love how Haruhi develops throughout the story and how everything flows and sounds. Even though it contains Male-Preg (Which I dont usually read)the characters voices suit them well and it has good plot. I look forward to reading more of it in the future. XD ------------------ =+=+=+ ------------------ P.O.I.S.O.N.C.A.G.E
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Reviewed By: Dreamkeeper On: January 19, 2008 16:09 EST
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I liked this chapter. And I love that you added that song. I liked All Dogs Go to Heaven when I was younger too. In fact, I still own it. I thought it fit well. I can't wait to see how those two react to going back to Naruto's birth place. And what about Suske? Will he realize that she's his daughter? Update soon! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Dream Keeper [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2008 19:39 EST
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Ai-ya! Please update soon! I really like how you portray Naruto! Where did you come up with his daughters name? It's beautiful. Does Uchiha find the duo, or no? I hope that's not where you plan on leaving it! I eagerly await your update. ^_^
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Reviewed By: B On: January 12, 2008 16:45 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update! Update! Update! Soon! Soon! Soon! Please! Please! Please!
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