Reviewed By: Mystic Klonoa On: January 16, 2010 01:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, I thought this was going to be one of those horrible crossover confusion type fanfics, but this was rather interesting to read and I've become rather enlightened somehow. Don't ask. I also really like the whole betrayal part. I seriously felt bad for Tails. I, myself, wanted to beat the living hell out of those dudes, especially Sonic and Sally. I cried at some points too. There were some spelling that needed fixing. Like "Miles Prowler"? It's Prower, lose the "l" and "Sparta" is spelled with a "d" not "t". All and all, great first chapter, I will continue reading more! Wahoo!
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