| "Like a Moth to a Flame" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: Kafica666 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2009 22:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please write more soon, I really enjoyed reading you story.
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Reviewed By: amz [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2009 21:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
eh... needs to be beta'd chapter one feels like a story list of requirements are being checked off. I understand the need for set up but as a reader I felt completely disconnected from all of the characters present.
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Reviewed By: VScorpio [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2008 15:19 CDT
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Excellent chapter. So, it seems that they are progressing, abliet slowly. At least the guys are still only at the suspicious stage. I look forwards to seeing how the next few days work out for them all. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: VScorpio [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2008 17:00 CDT
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Excellent chapter. Seems like things are progressing between the two of them, abliet slowly. Still, being stuck together will no doubt have some impact on them. It seems that for the moment the boys haven't caught on, but still the fact that they worked out what Sunako's aunt is trying means that Kyohei and Sunako will at least have a little more time to work out their feelings. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: VScorpio [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2008 15:14 CDT
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Excellent chapter. Some quite amusing moments, Ranmaru seems to be the most suspicious, although I think for the moment he is still being fooled. Still, I wonder what will happen now that the two of them are alone, what they will talk about without the others around to interrupt them. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: VScorpio [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2008 16:15 CDT
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Magnficent chapter. I like how the analysis of the guys worked out, it was good to see that the two of them were able to talk normally, even if it was only for a little while. Still, the fact they are going to try it out as a couple is good, the problem being concealing it from the others... On a final note, bleeding disorders...oh dear. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: VScorpio [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2008 12:20 CDT
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Excellent chapter. It seems the guys all have varying feelings about the situation, although Kyohei was noticably silence throughout. Still, its good to hear that Sunako has come to a decision about them, now the wuestion is how will Kyohei react to it. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: boriqua17 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2008 06:11 CST
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I feel kinda bad for kyohei even when sunako says that she wants to be friends but she's not denying him.........but I do wanna read and find out more
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Title: hi
Reviewed By: HikaruXKaoru [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2008 17:51 CST
Comment/Review:
write more please? i'm enjoying this!
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Title: kay17
Reviewed By: boriqua17 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2008 20:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I started reading this story and I've found myself wanting to keep reading more and more :) its very well written and I just love the wallflower anime and manga. Anyway great job and continue writing :)
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Reviewed By: HikaruXKaoru [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2008 10:11 CST
Comment/Review:
it was great...i love this story...it's got drama...and that's not common in fanfics these days. it's also very well written. i can't write at all but i have great ideas so i can't get much done...but i love your work.
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Reviewed By: HikaruXKaoru [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2008 21:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WRITE MORE!? *tearing up* i love it...i wanna read more...
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