| "Stick to the plan" Reviews/Comments [ 34 ] |
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Reviewed By: theblackangels_ [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2008 21:49 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Tba-YAY!!! *takes gummy bears* ~sessh-ratteles in closet* HELLO?!! some help would be nice! ~tba-eats gummi bears- im not nice. ~sessh- oh... right.. ~tba-smile* dont wrry. im here 4 u. *smile* if anything im loyal to the end. ~sessh- which might come quicker than you think. ~tba- shrugs* i aint dying yet. so dont wrry sessho-kun. ~sessh- your right. *sighs* im not that lucky. ~tba-smile* YEP!!! update soon! ~sessh-GET ME OUTTA HERE!!!!!!!!! *bangs on door of closet* ~tba-eats rest of gummi bears* not untill u get un- hyper. ~sessh-THATS NOT A WORD!!!!! ~tba- SHUT UP! its.. uh... my language. ~sessh-........ ~tba-shrugs* wat eve, man. *gives KagomeReborn some 'brownies' * uh.. dont eat them... give them to ur 'friends' *wink* wink* ~sessh- wat r u doing? wait! ... wats happing? LET ME OUT!!!!!!!!!! ~tba-smile*caio. ~TBA~
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2008 01:44 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... kagome's plan has started... seems that more drama will be coming... like how everyone's thoughts are being "voiced" out... but nothing about telling the truth... seems the group that was considered close are falling apart... can't wait when everything comes out... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: west On: March 12, 2008 21:46 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
man, it was just getting good. it's not fair to leave us there... oh well, guess that's what makes stories even better. Keep up the good work...^_^
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Reviewed By: Weeky Lord On: March 07, 2008 23:58 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow that was an amazing next chapter, I was on the edge of my seat the whole time. So the plan finally begins, I could not read fast enough to sate my hunger to know what was going to happen next. I was full of anticipation as miroku and kagome approached the bath house, and I could feel the pain of the two as they embraced each other crying. My mind is spinning and I Must Have More. I feel for Kagome though, I do still have hope for her, as I don't think she has completely lost herself yet, but I don't see how things can turn out well for anyone. So you must get better and continue the story, I shall send you a large can of chicken noodle soup so you will get better sooner. Oh and thank you for the brownie and the deliciously crunch coco puff cake.
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Reviewed By: theblackangels_ [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2008 22:02 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
~tba- thnx. keep it up. well. i wrote the review and my brother deleted it. and i have to get off soon. so this isnt one of the funny ones. ~sessh- wat? ur not funny. ~tba- oh ha ha. very funny. but i thought u didnt have a funny bone. ~sessh - i dont. i have a HUMOUROUS! ~tba-...... well... update soon bye! ~sessh- u know. i never did take that pill. ~tba- oh... WAIT! THEN WHO DID! ~sessh- i dont know... ~tba- that was a hallucigen & pain reliver..... oh no.... ~TBA~
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Reviewed By: onguts On: March 07, 2008 13:03 EST
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This story is realy different from what I usually find on this site. I gotta say I love it. Kagome plotting reveng is awesome. I really hope Inuyasha and Sango suffer for betraying KAgome ad Miroku.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2008 12:23 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... things are getting good... well seems that kagome has started her plan... so miroku knows now - finally... can't help but like how kagome's character is evovling... even kagome has a dark side... inuyasha & sango should get what they deserve... wonder what else kagome has planned for them... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: theblackangels_ [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2008 00:39 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow. didnt know kaggy was that evil. ~sessh-twitch-twitch-tramatized... 4....life.. ~tba-u ok? ~sessh-twitches some more- ~tba-holds sesshy's hand. -lets get u home. update soon. bye! ~TBA~
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Reviewed By: Weeky Lord On: January 31, 2008 00:33 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wonderful next chapter, a great bit of writting, cant wait to see what is coming next. I really like how you incorperated all of the past "chapter" headings into Kagome's rebirth. That was really cool. Well I shall wait for the next chapter, oh and thank you for the loli :)
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2008 03:21 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... they are all together again... but still feel bad for kagome... inuyasha says that he loves her... and sango says that she's like a sister... such hypocrites... hope kagome does something so that miroku will catch them in the act... wonder what kagome has in store for inuyasha & sango... seems that sesshoumaru has plans of his own... update as soon as you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2008 02:24 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg im sooo drawn to this now!!! Inuyasha and Sango..... oooooo GOD i didnt saw that coming..
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Reviewed By: Weeky Lord On: January 20, 2008 02:06 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was amazing, a wonderful story, very deep and full of mystery. Everyone has a secret, everyone has a plan, and I cant wait to find out how it all turns out. It is also very erotic through out, while not in such a way as to be distracting from the story. A wonderful piece of writting. I shall eagerly await the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2008 00:27 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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thank you! nice update... so they finally saw kagome again... wonder what kagome has in store for them... so her victims are inuyasha, sango & miroku... what about shippou & kirara... will sesshoumaru fall for kagome along the way though... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2008 00:02 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooo i love my dark stories just never with Kag/Ses.... but all well ^^ im loving it big time ^^ when Inuyasha is sleep i reckon Kagome will make her movie... what ever that might be lol
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Reviewed By: The Assasin [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2008 22:19 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
umm....where's the rest??? I joke. okay i don't. I want to read the rest of this story!!!!! Its soo gud im going to give you thousands of gold stars*shows you the stars*--*snatches them back* if you continue writing this. So do we have a deal??
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