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| "Fuinjutsu" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] | Title: Love it
Reviewed By: freelova [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2008 14:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have to continue. I'm going bokers with anticipation!!
| Reviewed By: Galaxy_of_Andromeda [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2008 13:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, um, wow. This is a very, very good use of the time travel concept and the best one I've seen. I especially like how you've made each character into their own. It's very refreshing to not see an over powered and over emotional naruto over seeing Minato. I also like the concept of there being no Kyuubi inside of Naruto but instead a big ball of chakra that was added to his own. I can't wait until Naruto gets full access to his chakra and Minato and Kushina realize that this 'Rei' is actually their son. You leave alot open for our imaginations. Very good job!
| Reviewed By: Vilkath [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2008 01:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
Interesting stuff, time travel to the past isn't so uncommon in Naruto fics. But I am glad at least Naruto is willing to make changes, nothing worse then time travel fics filled with angsty thoughts of the future and the main character unwilling to change any thing. So far things are going pretty well over all, the fight between Minato and Naruto though was slightly disapointing, not in how it was faught exactly but Minato's personalty. He was gloating, taunting and generaly looking down at Naruto a guy of a lower rank and fighting with a disability while he was using all his best moves without a care. I know Naruto agreed to the fight and all, still taking pleasure in fighting those weaker and at a disadvantage is more of a stuck up Uchiha or Hyuuga thing to do. It kind reminds me of racing a guy with one leg then laughing when you beat them.
| Reviewed By: Asaka_Sama [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2008 14:49 CST
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This fic is so interesting I can barely stand it. I love the way you portrayed Naruto in this fic! Instead of a ridiculously strong idiot, you made him an intelligent, brash young man. Keep up the good work!
| Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2008 20:01 CST
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Hmmm, huge update. And a VERY awesome one at that. Neh. I especially liked how Naruto used the clones so effectively, and the giant downside to using em in this event. Very cool. On top of that, the questions, hints and actions, all involving the spies in this war, are conflicting, and also combining. So, keep updating, this story rocks, though a little sooner next time? Or could you post where else you post this story? Like Fanfiction.net? Neh, just continue to update, and do so soon, ja ne.
| Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2008 18:46 CST
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Hmmm, interesting. Time travel is an overused concept in fanfiction, but it's a good one in this case. So far, you've designed a pretty good story, one worth reading a lot more of. Update again soon, I think this is really worth reading. Ja ne.
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