Reviewed By: sphynx0083 On: January 16, 2008 18:49 CST Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10
Comment/Review: the story is good but was too diffacult to read do to incomplete words and sentances. i sugest spell check or a beta! other than that its good. i would love to read it again once the errors are fixed.
Reviewed By:theblackangels_ [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2008 17:53 CST Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: its good.but the words are scrambled up. i could barely read. i stink at spelling. but i use spell check. try that. it might help. i think its good. though hard 2 read. not a flame aka bitchy review. i like it. honestly. ~TBA~
