Title: Awww... Reviewed By: Zero101 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2008 17:07 CST Comment/Review: That was great! Poor Ookami had a bit of a scare with past memories, but I really liked the ending. She seemed to snap right back to normal and play around a bit. And no one got OOC either (I had Captain get a little OOC by accident once ^^;) It was a real tender moment between all of them, but yet it wasn't too corny. You have a real knack for writing. Hey, maybe you can branch another fic off this idea, or add another chapter, which ever you preferre. Great job and I can't wait to see you're next chapter. Bye! :3
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