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| "Desires- A Change of Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: Inukagdoll [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2010 16:01 CST
Comment/Review:
Please let me know when you update
| Reviewed By: tinkle time kelly [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2008 21:56 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry to say, but I'm one who has read your original story, though it, went a little off at some points. It showed a little bit more maturity and creativity then the childish teen/mall thing you're trying to use your friends in. Write another one for them. But don't dis a half descent job, you've already, almost, completed satisfactorily.
| Reviewed By: Dark_Angle666 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2008 22:07 CST
Comment/Review:
Great Job! I love the way you've set teh stroy up. Good choice for making the mall highschool students. I guess that makes them all the more realtabel, and equally enjoyable. I was always a little confused about the war thing in the other version (though it was a pretty cool idea). I really enjoy the way you've set thnigs up. Looks very good, can't wait for an update!
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