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Reviewed By: outlawstar00000 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2009 22:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow i haven't cried like that since Zack died in ff7 crisis core well actually i probably cried more from this you need to put this on fanfiction.net you'll get a lot more views that way the way spyro died at the end made me cry (don't judge me its very hard to make me cry)hell i cried at the beginning when cynder died very nice job on the epilogue that was a very heart warming moment i hope you continue to write more fanfic your a very good writer
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Reviewed By: Daianta [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2008 11:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
GAH!! why did spyro have to die! he's awesome! but you write really well ^^ and it was a good read
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