| "The Dance Of The Lovers" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Title: The Dance Of The Lovers
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2008 06:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: bookwrm150 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2008 14:46 CST
Comment/Review:
i wnat to know more! i love it
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Reviewed By: theblackangels_ [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2008 20:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HM.. THATS INTRESTING. NOT LIKE ANY STORY I READ B4. ~sessh- u got the caps lock on. ~tba- oh. thnx.update soon. its really cute. y would she faint. i wonder if he gives he mouth to mouth. -smirk- ~kagome-uh.... -deep blush- ~tba- i mean perfect way to get a kiss from sessh. besides, if he's teaching the class. he must be good. so wat better than to give the kiss of life. ~kags- u know sessh doesnt kiss, he kinda growls. and kills right? ~tba- yep. when u wake up, u can ask him. besides it would b funny to see u two talking. it would be akward. ~kag- a creepy akward? ~sessh- a weird akward? ~tba- just akward ~sessh- im going 2 b enjoying ur dreams crushed tba. ~tba- dont make me use the collor! ~kags- u finally got the collor on him? ~tba- yep. did it when he was sleeping. ~sessh- huh!-checks neck- omg! how did u... WAIT! U WENT IN MY ROOM! UR GONNA DIE! ~tba- shiver- uh.. come on sesshomaru.. lets not be hasty. im writting the review. ~sessh- then write ur will while ur at it. ~kags- oooh! put me down 4 all ur shoes! ~tba- ur . not. helping! ~kags- srry. i just really like ur shoes. `tba- uh.. update soon! bye!-runs away with in-human speed- Gomen Nasai sesshomaru!(im really sorry)Aisumimasen!!! (frogive me) ~sessh- Iie!!!!!!!!!! (no) -runs after tba- ~TBA~
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2008 22:48 CST
Comment/Review:
A Kiss from Sesshoumaru as first prize .....hehe...Jk.....This is a wrong, perverted, funny, and amaizing story....its just to great....hehe keep writing.... XD........Nyuka.........Meow
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