| "Trapped with a monster" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: moonsaiyanprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2002 22:00 CDT
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You mean after a lemon like that he still refuses to not go with her to the dance! O.O Woah! Update soon. :) |
Reviewed By: serendipity [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2002 22:26 CDT
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wow. New chapie! ^_^ but, Veggie's being a meanie... |
Reviewed By: serendipity [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2002 08:32 CDT
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Hey!. haha. I really like this! You have got to hurry with the next chapters, quick! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: moonsaiyanprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2002 08:06 CDT
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This was great! Will there bve a lemon soon? Soorry, that's all I seem to think about. So Vegeta is intrested in Bulma? Hmmm....where will this lead? |
Reviewed By: moonsaiyanprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2002 09:42 CDT
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This chapter was great! Will they go at it in the next chapter, or will someone find them?! |
Reviewed By: moonsaiyanprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2002 18:25 CDT
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This fic kicks ass! You gotta update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Shateera40@hotmail.com On: July 01, 2002 18:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yo,wussup? Well anyways I enjoyed reading this fic. Alittle suggestion. Make Vegeta meaner. Do not make him OCC. Well that's it. peace |
