| "Ranma Kurata" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: Critic/crazy On: June 24, 2013 13:15 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First/let/me/apologize/for/the/wierd/writing/.My/keyboard/isn't/working/and /my/online/keyboard's/space/bar/isn't/working/either.Anyway/I/don't//know/w ho/Ranma/should/end/up/with/but/I'm/leaning/on/Nabiki/because/Natsume/might /react/badly/to/his/curse.Also/I/think/Kiseki/High/School/For/Child/Enterta iners/is/a/good/name/for/Ranma's/new/school.BTW/'Kiseki'/means/'miracle'/in /Japanese. |
Title: Rei of Hope
Reviewed By: Shadow Megatron [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2012 19:40 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm been awhile but an interesting addition. I am intrigued at where you will be going with this. Brian~ |
Reviewed By: nikichan On: March 26, 2012 17:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is about time you updated after soo long await. I hope that you update real soon I would like this story to be finished after waiting soon long to find out how it will end. Also, for the pairing of Ranma and Nabiki. I think it's okay with the how you wrote her to be. Even if she is OCC. So, please update with a new chapter soon. Bye! |
Title: Chapter 3
Reviewed By: Shadow Megatron [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2009 04:29 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting so far. Pairings for this Story I suggest so far? Nabiki/Ranma(She HAS shown that she CAN be redeemed) Akane/Nobody Kasumi/???(Not Tofu) I await with great patience for further chapters. As said Very interesting so far and you have yet to really start too , I am a shudder with anticipation!
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Title: Ranma Kurata
Reviewed By: griffenvamp On: August 25, 2008 17:53 EDT
Comment/Review:
very well done story hope you keep it up. i would sugjest you pair ranma with nabiki since she seem's to be the only one realy looking at whats happening.and kasumi seem indiferent to it. keep up the great work
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Title: Review
Reviewed By: Mophet On: July 28, 2008 15:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I say Nabiki!!! I look forward to more and hope that further chapters will also be posted at fanfic.net!
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Reviewed By: nikichan On: July 24, 2008 21:20 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story and i wiil keep reading until the end depending on what happens in future reading of this story. Please keep it up with this story and update soon. As for Nabiki as a pairing for Ranma. I vote that Nabiki deserves another chance. For I know how she treated Ranma in the past was very bad, she seems to understand what she did wrong is sincerely trying change things for the better. So, I say give her another chance at love with Ranma.
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Title: Fanfic first? Hardly.
Reviewed By: TaiKhan On: July 23, 2008 02:54 EDT
Comment/Review:
I'm not familiar with the series you're crossing Ranma with in this, but it has caught my attention. My vote's for Nabiki on the pair-up issue. As for Ranma being asexual? That's how he is characterized in practically every piece of fanfaction on the net (with the notable exception of outright 'lemons'). So, it would in no way be a first. Asexual - sexually inactive On the other hand, I could assume that you meant 'bisexual'. Bisexual - attracted to both sexes. This too would not be a first, however, it is fairly uncommon.
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Reviewed By: Mega Shadow [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2008 18:30 EDT
Comment/Review:
I think you should pair Ranma up with Natsume cause with I love a good crossover couple...Thats just my opion though
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Reviewed By: Cromanose On: April 02, 2008 09:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
asome i like this story and i cant wait for more
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Reviewed By: Mega Shadow [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2008 11:44 EDT
Comment/Review:
great chapter....sorry I can't think of a name for the type of school you want
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Title: Chap 1
Reviewed By: Shadow Megatron [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2008 11:12 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
An intruiging start you have in this genre. I the infamous Shadow Megatron(Plus various titles) wait paitentlly for more.... May the force be with you.....Quack!
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Title: Nice
Reviewed By: Huji On: January 26, 2008 03:37 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very interesting story and I do hope you will add more to it.
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Reviewed By: Mega Shadow [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2008 18:15 EST
Comment/Review:
This story is really good I don't know much about the other anime but it is looking really good.
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