| "Father to Daughter" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Title: Interesting
Reviewed By: Mors' [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2008 22:59 CDT
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This was a very good story. It was greatly written, had few if any errors. I really liked the part were Isshin destroyed the gopher game that was really funny. I think that if you were to make a sequel to this it would be a great piece to read. Keep up the great work.~~Mors
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Reviewed By: cactuspd [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2008 10:43 CST
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you can't help but love goofy, idiotic but sharp isshin. abd the way he just manipulates everything to his own palns. ichigo and rukia never stood a chance, and with uruhara helping him, i can bet that if you would do a sequel *hint,hint*, we'd have ichigo confessing or rukia admtting each of their feelings.
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Reviewed By: Bushido On: February 03, 2008 01:22 CST
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Noooooo! I'm so sad to see it end but a more fiitting end I can not think of. That story was quality material. I am just happy to have been privelaged enough to have witnessed this peice of work.
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Reviewed By: .yuwa On: January 28, 2008 23:17 CST
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NICE! ty for the rev on my oder acct. ^-^v kipapdagudwork
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Reviewed By: Bushido On: January 27, 2008 15:53 CST
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Keep them coming, this is hilarious! Your interpretations are dead on if no fo he advancement of IchiRuki's relationship which is well placed. keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: anhimals [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2008 15:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Rukia and her love for Chappy the Rabbit is just hilarious. Isshin seems to really love Rukia as his third daughter. Rukia and Ichigo are finally understanding their feelings for each other...yay! I can't wait to see what Isshin has in store for the end of the day! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: anhimals [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2008 23:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love isshin! he is such a funny father! i can't wait for your next update!
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Reviewed By: Tituba [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2008 18:30 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah! Can't wait to find out what Isshin is going to do to Rukia on their father-daughter day. This is a very well-planned story and I think it has the potential to do very well. Keep writing, I can't wait for the next chapter! Cheers!
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Reviewed By: Bushido On: January 20, 2008 22:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Font ColorThis is hilarious i cant wait for the next installment!!!! I really enjoyed your story, it flows nicely and it gives a look into the character's heads that is believable. Great job!Font Color
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Reviewed By: akirk85029 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2008 20:56 CST
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Too funny!!:) Can't wait to see what the day holds for them:)
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