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| "The Destined Kind" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: DeeAnn On: January 29, 2008 23:44 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
not cliche, dramatic and building but not to over done, could use more angst. I like angst
| Title: Queen Penguin
Reviewed By: nishi_pen On: January 29, 2008 23:42 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I want more!!! I am not sure why more people don't review, I locked myself out of my account, and I still review. This is a great story. Maybe good enough to see that hoards of penguins bring you plate upon plate of cookies and milk till your ability to leave the desk and stop writing has been fully comprimised. Hmmm???? Remember keyword was maybe.....chapter 3 however could make the deal....tempting no????
| Title: Queen Penguin
Reviewed By: nishi_pen On: January 21, 2008 23:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You got a 9 because there isn't any more. I love where this is going, can't wait to see how it turn out. Write more, and maybe I will comand my penguins to bring you milk
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