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| "Undying Love" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: airen0920 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2008 01:18 CDT
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That was great! But i'd say you shouLd have someone check your work first before you post it. There were a Lot of grammaticaL errors, you use bLush a LittLe too much which makes it kinda awkward to read over and over again. But, i Like your pLot, you have a good story here. And i agree with the impLied statement that says: "FLLay is a bitch!" When's your next update? i can't wait for the next chapter, so pLease update soon! Keep up the good work! P.S. PLease proofread! Or get a beta-reader.
| Title: awesome
Reviewed By: narusaku_69 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2008 12:14 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesome keep it up, i can't wait to see what happens next
| Reviewed By: halfbreed-gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2008 18:34 CST
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the ice skating scene was probably one of my favorite parts in this story. its good that they both trust each other so much, and to go all the way must show they love each other. i cant wait to hear more of this story.
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