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| "Black and Blue Lagoon" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] | Reviewed By: Remmi On: April 27, 2011 22:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow this fic was amazing! Im so happy i came across it! Ive been craving some new Black Lagoon action and this fic definitely serves that purpose. I would love it very much if you were to write some more like this, I really like the Revy/Rock paring. Anyway thanks for the great read and i really hope you keep up the great work =) | Reviewed By: White Knight On: April 07, 2010 22:56 EDT
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I'm only against cigarettes because the stuff they put in em is bad for you. Most of it is downright toxic. As for smoking them? You're an idiot if you do, but it's your lungs, so go ahead if it flicks your switch.
| Reviewed By: King Baka [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2008 01:07 EDT
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Great stuff. There definately aren't enough Black Lagoon fanfictions floating around, but this is the best I've found so far. Your writing style and diction really captures the feel of the series. I liked how you incorporated just the right amount of swearing, both in and out of dialogue. The plot was engaging, original, and believable at the same time. The story had everything the series has: people dying, people acting crazy, and some interesting Rock/Revy interaction. Even with the intensifying of their relationship, you kept those two in character. So much so that I felt like this could be made into an anime arc, or maybe an OVA (even the sex...this ain't no kids show!) Overall, thanks for the highly entertaining read and keep up the great work.
| Reviewed By: Mr. Joy On: May 05, 2008 15:37 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A fun read. "Black Lagoon" is, to me, a surprisingly underscored series in the fan fiction department. Why is that? It's got everything a rough-anime lover needs: gunplay, elegant profanity, train cars of blood, humor from the id, and the best anti-protagonists imaginable. You did good with this story, and I like the idea of a Revy/Rock pairing. The end of the series left me wondering if it actually happened. Who knows? Anyway, keep up the good work.
| Reviewed By: camintmier [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2008 00:21 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story (as usual) Nugar. I really like the pairing of Rock and Revy, and you've written them well. As far as Black Lagoon stories go, 10's across the board. I wonder though, Rock didn't use any protection when he was with Revy... Any possibility of Revy getting knocked up? Revy as a mom, that's something you don't see every day. Keep up the good work.
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