| "It Takes Two" Reviews/Comments [ 78 ] |
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Reviewed By: jaimed1968 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2008 16:31 CDT
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I thought that you did an awesome job on the shower. Not much that I could add. The only shower that I've ever been a part of was one that was thrown for me, it was from my team at work and about 1/2 hour long. Not much time for anything exciting really, just some pizza and gifts. I loved the whole Inuyasha and cake bit. I thought dogs and chocolate did not mix? Either way, loved the chapter, looking forward to more of this story. For a guy, you are doing an awesome job, I see that you're taking it more from Inuyasha's point of view. Something a lot of us chicks couldn't do. Looking forward to Sesshomaru's answer to Rin's questions. Thanks again and feel free to drop me a line if you need more help.
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2008 02:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wouldn't Shippo and Rin be more like sisters and brothers or cousins than Aunts and uncles????
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2008 13:56 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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good update... things coming along fine... glad that they're together again... wonder what the babies will be... nice they had a baby shower... can't wait for the birth of the babies... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: n8tivegurl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2008 10:41 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww, I love going to baby showers. You play games, get prizes, eat (basically have fun). You did an excellent job with the baby shower although the diaper being thrown at the wall...uhh I've never heard of that. So, Rin decided to ask Sess about love? Hahaha, I bet he's squirming now huh...oh I can't wait to see what his reaction/response is going to be. Thanks for the update. Later.
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Reviewed By: Hitsugaya630 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2008 08:15 CDT
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I was a little surprised about the throwing the diapers at the wall...but I haven't been to a baby shower, so, hell, they probably do that. Anyways great chapter. And I honestly don't think it was that short. But I can't believe Rin asked Sess about love. That's hilarious! lol. I bet he was caught off-guard with that one too! Update Soon!
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Reviewed By: imanewme [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2008 22:34 CDT
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*pssttttt* All a baby shower is is an opportunity for a girl's night in. Think of it as a daytime slumber party... which apparently you did because it came across very accurate. Again with the 'awwww' moments. I can't wait to see Sesshoumaru's response to Rin. (oh to be a fly on the wall and see his face!) We all know there's more to the big guy than meets the eye, but this is going to be good. I love seeing Mr. Sexypants squirm in these stories. (grin)Thank you for another great chapter. See you next time!
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2008 21:40 CDT
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Yep, a cute, funny chapter. Poor IY, so confused by all the 'modern' inventions and rituals. But at least he got his cake! Oh, to see the look on Sess's face...priceless! That's def something to look forward to.
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Reviewed By: Hitsugaya630 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2008 18:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was amazing! I didn't think Sesshoamru would get caught off guard by a question...er...well I sort of did but...you know what I meant. But I really like this story. Please update soon! And Have A Nice Day!
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Reviewed By: n8tivegurl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2008 18:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very cute! I just knew Souta would get all red seeing Sango! Oh and the recent developments with Kohaku and Rin very cute. Oh one more, I thought Sesshoumaru being caught off guard at Kagome's innocent questioning was great.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2008 22:54 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nice update... glad that things have been cleared... funny how kagome spoke with sesshoumaru - caught him off guard... now just waiting for the births... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: imanewme [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2008 22:20 CDT
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Awwwwwww... several really good awwwww moments in here. I about fell over laughing when Kagome confronted Sesshoumaru about the perfume. (giggle) I'm having a lot of fun reading this. :)
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Reviewed By: jaimed1968 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2008 21:15 CDT
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I'm greatly loving this story, especially the caught off-guard Sesshomaru. I'm sure that would be a rather interesting story in itself to hear/read, but I'm still enjoying the girls as they go through the hormones, cravings, etc. The baby shower sounds like fun, especially considering who's throwing it. Looking forward to more of this story. Thank you for the update.
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2008 20:46 CDT
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Nice chapter, sweet reunion with Shippou. Sess was a surprise, and fun to see teased, too. Good transition chapter, after the angst of the last. Fun reading, that had me smiling all the way through.
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2008 23:24 CST
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That was handled well, I thought. Having already dealt with the whole Inu hanyou, fuedal era problem no doubt eased their acceptance. But what have you got planned with Sess? Tension? Drama? Angst? Humor? Perhaps all four? Oh yes, our hanyou def got himself into it with this adventure!
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Reviewed By: jaimed1968 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2008 00:39 CST
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I feel for the girls, just finding out that their friend will live longer then them by hundreds of years. That would suck, knowing that Kagome and Sango would live forever and they would die. I'm still curious as to what Koga and Miroku would think of this whole situation, considering that both have loved one of the girls at some point in time. Thanks for the update. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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