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Title: wohooo
Reviewed By: eddie_star_wars [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2008 18:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed the way this fic went although there were a few spots where there was some extra letters typed in. Watch out for those
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Reviewed By: vampiredog [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2008 09:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
iv allways thought that sango and kagome are hot but they got feelings for each other than sex!!!!!!!!! thats gay thats really gay but
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Reviewed By: ceira aka n8tivegurl On: April 14, 2008 10:31 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So Miroku and Ayame huh? You know I haven't came across a Miroku/Ayame story either...it will be interesting to see how that comes about. Anyways I really enjoyed reading your story. Great Job! And until next time ^_^
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2008 23:04 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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finally the end... wonderful story... really liked it... nice ending with miroku & ayame showing up... good job... great work... until next time...
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2008 21:39 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice ending. I was curious as to how Miroku would react to Sango and Kagome being with Inuyasha. I am even more curious as to how Miroku anded with Ayame. I will be looking forward to that story.
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Reviewed By: jaimed1968 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2008 13:40 CDT
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That was rather unexpected... with Miroku showing up like that with Ayame. I loved how you had her basically seduce the whole group in that one scene before turning back to her innocent self. I really liked Inu's comment about Koga not wanting a piece of that action as well. So... this next story, will basically be Miroku growing up to become the older, more refined perv that we all love. This story will be well worth reading. Are you planning on having Koga in there as well? Looking forward to the next story. Feel free to drop me a line for beta work again. I really loved helping with what I was able to on this one. Love the stories and looking forward to more of your works.
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2008 13:24 CDT
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Great finish! Glad to see the threesome so tight knit and family-centric. Wonderful final lemon in the last chapter, great way to bring them back together, sort of full circle. Very well wrapped up, and wonderful lures for the next story. Knowing Miroku, it should be quite a ride!
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Reviewed By: n8tivegurl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2008 11:49 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, very nicely done. Awww, Rin and Kohaku's first kiss. How cute. Whoa, so Rin and Kohaku got an eye full...heh. Thats funny and kind of embarrassing. I mean he just saw his sister with Inuyasha and Kagome. So this is the end...I feel kind of sad but oh well. All good things must come to an end right? Do you have any other stories planned...or is that it for you? Just curious. Well...until the very, very end right later
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Reviewed By: Golden Lily On: April 11, 2008 11:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I love it! absolutely amazing. Poor innocent Rin... tehe... Can you write a sequal focused on Rin and Kohaku? Maybe a few years into the future when they are both a little older? Kohaku courting Rin... i think it could be really cute! Good job on It Take Two! a refreshing original!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2008 21:38 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... the babies have names now... really cute... and inuyasha was finally able to spend time with his mates... almost done?... but wondering the mention of ayame... have a guess who she's with (i think i know who she's mated to)... anyway looking forward to the epilogue... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: jaimed1968 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2008 18:07 CDT
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I think that you've done a wonderful job on this latest edition of 'It Takes Two.' I was LMAO over the last part of the story, with Rin and Kohaku... Wonder what they are thinking after that little display? Curious as to who Ayame is with... considering Koga's promise not to tell, nor his interaction with Sesshomaru, I can only imagine who her mate is now. I also feel that you've not lost your lemony touch either, awesome job there as well, considering the wait for Inuyasha was similar to a man spending days in the desert without a drop to drink, then stumble upon an oasis of such beauty. Good job, looking forward to being able to help you some more, as well as more of your works.
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Reviewed By: bookworm810 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2008 19:22 CDT
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I've surprised myself by how much I've liked this story. Call me borning, but usually I'm a straigh Kagome/Inuyasha fan and avoid fics that pair either of those two up with someone different (I still refuse to read any Sess/Kag fics, I mean come on like that'll happen?). This one however I got really into. I liked how you made their relationships about love rather than just meaningless sex like you too often see with these kind of fics. I'm looking forward to seeing how this ends.
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Reviewed By: n8tivegurl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2008 11:21 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! Here's to the birth of a healthy baby girl and a health baby boy. Now comes the names and hopefully the discription of the babies right? I can't wait to see who starts fighting to be the first to hold the babies. You did a great job describing the births. I've never witnessed someone giving birth either...well aside from having to sit through those child birthing shows on TLC (my sister likes watching those shows. I don't looks painful) anyways great work!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2008 01:09 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
great chapter update... that was really nice of kagome for removing the rosary from inuyasha's neck... saved him from all the pain... liked how sesshoumaru helped inuyasha keep his mind occupied - very brotherly... interesting that kouga came to support kagome... so sango had a girl while kagome had a boy... that's good... next is their names and what comes next... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2008 21:24 CDT
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Very nicely done. Good tension, interspersed with proper humor. The birthing itself had me laughing/smiling, as the girls put IY through the wringer. Now the real job begins, parenting two hanyou babes, and caring for their mothers. Should be fun to see!
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2008 01:27 CDT
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Very cute with Rin and Kohaku. Rin always was spunky and fearless. I think the young slayer might have met his match. And way to turn the screws on Sess! Always interesting seeing him in the hot seat. IY? Two mates in labor? You are indeed a cruel critter, Xag. Should really give him a chance to show his mettle and maturity, dealing with both at once.
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Reviewed By: n8tivegurl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2008 10:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoa o.O both Kagome and Sango are both in labor! Heh, I wonder how Inuyasha will handle it. I bet he was running to the hot springs and once he heard his mates yell for him to tried to turn around and ended up flat on his face. At least that's how I pictured it. Anyways its time to see the pups. Oooh I can't wait to see what they have! Wouldn't it be wild if one of them had twins! Thanks for the update :)
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Reviewed By: jaimed1968 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2008 09:14 CDT
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Aww! Rin and Kohaku dating. That is so cute, especially the way that you described the great Lord Fluffy as unable to speak when Rin asked him about 'love.' That was hysterical, especially when his jaw opened and nothing came out. I LMAO over that one. I rather enjoyed the whole false labor bit and loved seeing Inuyasha being so attentive to his mates needs. Now the real 'fun' begins. I greatly loved how you set it up to have Kagome to go into labor at the same time as Sango. Talk about Inu having a headache now. That has been known to happen, especially with women that are in close proximity to one another. Looking forward to the next chapter. Thank you.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2008 23:21 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
great update... cute scenes with rin & kohaku... seems that sango & kagome are in labor now... wonder how inuyasha will handle them both... will be quite a funny and interesting chapter... also kaede will need help with the births... update soon... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2008 23:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol. baby time!! poor sesshy.
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Reviewed By: Hitsugaya630 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2008 16:50 CDT
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oh wow, both Sango AND Kagome are gonna have the babies? Man, poor Inu. Kagome's probably gonna sit him into oblivion after she;s done. I mean, I've heard that women always curse the fathers of the babies during birth, but I mean, she's got the whole necklace thing going on. She could do some serious damage. And Sango, man she could totally kick his sorry ass afterwards. I can't wait to see how this turns out. Update soon!
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