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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2008 11:25 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice and hot lemon between the three of them. I wouldn't be surprised that Sango doesn't at least try to go through the well. I think that she should be able to make it since she is connected to both Kagome and Inuyasha. Though if Kagome's friends find out that she is pregnant with Inuyasha's child just as Kagome is they will do everything they can to convince Kagome to dump Inuyasha. Can't wait to see what happens next.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2008 06:06 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... quite intense... will sango be able to pass through the well... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: skath On: February 10, 2008 03:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is really good. hot as hell but u gata do more of all 3 together.
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Reviewed By: Kawaii Bell [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2008 23:02 CST
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awsomeness i love this story i just wanted to say that and i enjoy reading it. and i hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: Ariel Himura [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2008 03:42 CST
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you did a good job...keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2008 00:26 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... so both kagome & sango are pregnant... funny inuyasha went shopping for their food... can't believe kagome's mom and souta let inuyasha go alone... and then kagome's friends are quite nosy... kinda nice of kagome's mom to invite sango to their home and time... will sango get through the well... maybe she can... wonder what happens next... update as soon as soon you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: jaimed1968 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2008 23:00 CST
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Poor Inuyasha, dealing with the cravings issue. Luckily for my husband, he only had to worry about the occasional DQ Blizzard. I feel for the poor hanyou, going to the store without any help. What were Kagome's mom and Sota thinking sending him by himself? I bet he has nightmares of that for weeks to come. As for what he'll think when he comes upon his two mates, I think that it will probably be something along the lines of 'hey, save me some!' I'm really enjoying this story and eagerly await the next chapter. Thanks.
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Reviewed By: jaimed1968 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2008 11:15 CST
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I'm really enjoying this story, especially the jealousy of Kagome over Sango becoming pregnant 1st. If I'm not mistaken the 'alpha' female is usually pregnant 1st instead of the 'beta' female. I could be wrong but I thought that it fit here because, technically that is the roles of Kagome and Sango. I really loved how Sesshomaru got a little involved in Inuyasha's little problem with the oni. That was quite hysterical that he had to explain in not so gentle words that Inuyasha was in heat and that because of his 'heat' the other demons were acting up, thus causing Sesshomaru a headache. I guess he just needs to get laid too, as much of a stiff prick that he is, you know. Anyways, I love this story and the intrigue that will ensue, and thus headache for Inuyasha with having both mates pregnant at the same time, that is if Kagome gets pregnant. As to hormones, trust me, especially after 3 kids, that it is an emotional roller coaster. One minute your ecstatic and then the next, for no apparent reason, your crying your heart out over the smallest things. If you need some help with the whole pregnancy things, let me know. I'll try and help where I can. Thank you for this wonderfully interesting story.
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2008 23:14 CST
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Wow. Nothing like hanyou stamina, eh? Very nice chapter, giving K her much needed night with InuYasha. Love that she's more aggressive now, more confindent in her sexuality. Makes for a more steamy time, without a doubt. The scene between IY and K's mom showed his hard won maturity, his dedication to K's safety and happiness. Glad to see it. I think, with the way they're all handling things, that life for them will only get better. This is definately an interesting and welcome take on things, Xag. Good job!
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2008 21:48 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am probably going to be skewered by my fellow readers for saying this but don't worry about the speed of the updates, you do a good job. I loved how Inuyasha went to talk to Kagome's mother before agreeing to make Kagome pregnant. Good thing he didn't talk to her grandfather. I hope Inuyasha is ready to have two little ones running around wanting "Daddy time" and possibly being envious of time he spends with the other. I am glad he was sensitive to Kagome's feelings about her being left out, I hope he shows the same sensitivity to Sango. It should be an interesting family grouping with the three of them and their children, I also hope the villagers are going to be accommodating and not give them grief for the unorthodox grouping.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2008 18:47 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... nice of inuyasha to tell kagome's mom... really sweet of inuyasha to ask kagome how she feels about everything... hope kagome does get pregnant... it'll be quite funny how inuyasha will deal with two pregnant women... will miroku come back to visit them... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: Alliecoolgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2008 17:42 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So the next chappie will be the last? Interesting.... can't wait to read it!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2008 01:59 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... as expected of kagome... it's in her character to be happy for the ones she loves... and glad that she's finally made a decision on what she wants with her life with inuyasha & sango... wonder what inuyasha & sango will say... how will they react... update as soon as you can... looking forward to the last chapter... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2008 17:16 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well this is definitely different fic. I think I like it but I am not sure yet with the Sango angle thrown into the Kagome/Inuyasha mix. I do know it is fun to read and I can't wait to see what happens next.
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Reviewed By: DARKENED DEMONESS [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2008 21:50 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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THIS IS ONE OF THE MOST AWZOME STORIES EVA!!! PLEASE WRITE MORE. I LOVE THE IDEA OF SANGO HAVING A BABY WITH INUYASHA AND KAGOME. I JUST THINK U NEED TO HAVE A THREESOME IN THE STORY IF U WANT. JA NE!!!
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