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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2008 19:46 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... kinda bad for inuyasha he can't get through the well... and his pups won't let him... glad that sesshoumaru was there to help by waking up the goshinboku... at least inuyasha was able to kow the reasons why... what will inuyasha do now... what about kagome and sango... update as soon as you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2008 16:54 CST
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Tense chapter here, with a dash of humor. Love bringing Goshinboku into it, very nice. Interesting that the pups have such abilities so young, methinks all three parents are in for quite a time! Souta crushing on Sango made me laugh, it was good to see Sango finally meet K's mom, who may now become like her own. Will be interesting to see how you bring IY to them, and what fun awaits Sango in the future.
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Reviewed By: jaimed1968 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2008 18:14 CST
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Yes, you are evil for leaving us with a cliff hanger. But I guess that your good as well, seeing as this is a wonderful, in depth story. I can see that this shows Sesshoamru caring for Rin as well as Rin caring for Sango and Kagome. I'm rather curious if we are going to ever see Miroku or Koga in this fic. Not that I don't like this story the way that it is, I can see them throwing a monkey wrench into the whole Inuyasha three some. I'd love to see the look on the of their faces when the news is broke to them of how he claimed both Kagome and Sango as his mates. That I think would be hysterical and worthy of being written. I was LMAO over the whole change in cravings that both Sango and Kagome were having. That is so true, as well as the emotional roller coaster. I'm thoroughly enjoying this story and eagerly await the next update. Thanks again for this story.
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2008 14:21 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I bet that since they fell they both went through together, lowering didn't work. It will be interesting to see if Inuyasha can't go through right now since Sango can. I also can't wait to see the reaction Sango gets from Kagome's family.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2008 05:55 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... so rin and sesshoumaru are around... why didn't kagome with sango get through the well the first time... but them being pushed and falling into the well - did they get through... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: jaimed1968 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2008 14:45 CST
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That was definitely intense. Loved the chapter and hope that you keep up the good work. Thanks for the update, and eagerly await the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2008 11:25 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice and hot lemon between the three of them. I wouldn't be surprised that Sango doesn't at least try to go through the well. I think that she should be able to make it since she is connected to both Kagome and Inuyasha. Though if Kagome's friends find out that she is pregnant with Inuyasha's child just as Kagome is they will do everything they can to convince Kagome to dump Inuyasha. Can't wait to see what happens next.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2008 06:06 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... quite intense... will sango be able to pass through the well... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: skath On: February 10, 2008 03:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is really good. hot as hell but u gata do more of all 3 together.
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Reviewed By: Kawaii Bell [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2008 23:02 CST
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awsomeness i love this story i just wanted to say that and i enjoy reading it. and i hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: Ariel Himura [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2008 03:42 CST
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you did a good job...keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2008 00:26 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... so both kagome & sango are pregnant... funny inuyasha went shopping for their food... can't believe kagome's mom and souta let inuyasha go alone... and then kagome's friends are quite nosy... kinda nice of kagome's mom to invite sango to their home and time... will sango get through the well... maybe she can... wonder what happens next... update as soon as soon you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: jaimed1968 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2008 23:00 CST
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Poor Inuyasha, dealing with the cravings issue. Luckily for my husband, he only had to worry about the occasional DQ Blizzard. I feel for the poor hanyou, going to the store without any help. What were Kagome's mom and Sota thinking sending him by himself? I bet he has nightmares of that for weeks to come. As for what he'll think when he comes upon his two mates, I think that it will probably be something along the lines of 'hey, save me some!' I'm really enjoying this story and eagerly await the next chapter. Thanks.
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Reviewed By: jaimed1968 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2008 11:15 CST
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I'm really enjoying this story, especially the jealousy of Kagome over Sango becoming pregnant 1st. If I'm not mistaken the 'alpha' female is usually pregnant 1st instead of the 'beta' female. I could be wrong but I thought that it fit here because, technically that is the roles of Kagome and Sango. I really loved how Sesshomaru got a little involved in Inuyasha's little problem with the oni. That was quite hysterical that he had to explain in not so gentle words that Inuyasha was in heat and that because of his 'heat' the other demons were acting up, thus causing Sesshomaru a headache. I guess he just needs to get laid too, as much of a stiff prick that he is, you know. Anyways, I love this story and the intrigue that will ensue, and thus headache for Inuyasha with having both mates pregnant at the same time, that is if Kagome gets pregnant. As to hormones, trust me, especially after 3 kids, that it is an emotional roller coaster. One minute your ecstatic and then the next, for no apparent reason, your crying your heart out over the smallest things. If you need some help with the whole pregnancy things, let me know. I'll try and help where I can. Thank you for this wonderfully interesting story.
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2008 23:14 CST
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Wow. Nothing like hanyou stamina, eh? Very nice chapter, giving K her much needed night with InuYasha. Love that she's more aggressive now, more confindent in her sexuality. Makes for a more steamy time, without a doubt. The scene between IY and K's mom showed his hard won maturity, his dedication to K's safety and happiness. Glad to see it. I think, with the way they're all handling things, that life for them will only get better. This is definately an interesting and welcome take on things, Xag. Good job!
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