| "Sesshoumaru's Mate: A Valentine's Story" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: snowbirdyoukai [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2008 18:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay!! Masaru and Sango. My second favorite couple. Do you plan on writing into the story any of their courtship from the past? Or will that be included in the other story? I'm very curious to know more of their story. I take it from a previous comment of hers that he must be a bit of a hentai, too. Plus the way he was smirking to himself as he was watching her behind as she was walking.
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Reviewed By: kagome45556 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2008 20:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
hmmm, that's interesting. I wonder what Sesshoumaru meant.
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Reviewed By: Maddie50 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2008 14:38 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm confused again. I think I am growing stupid as I get older. I'm not even going to ask questions to reveal the depth of my confusion. I am diligently going to perform research to obtain the possible answers. Jean
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Reviewed By: kashuneko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2008 14:19 CDT
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This chapter reads as the script of a manga. I fear that some imagery is left to the imagination instead of painted in the pictures. In other words, you left some of the details out and I would venture to guess that many of your readers won't pick up on all that has just happened. (Not that this is necessarily a bad thing.)
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Reviewed By: kagome45556 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2008 19:00 CDT
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well isn't that interesting, I never thought that he would be a warlock. I must wonder where you learned all of this Celtic lore, if it is true. Are you Celtic? or was it simple curiosity that led you to this story? I look forward to the rest.
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Reviewed By: nizume_yuki On: March 17, 2008 17:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE CONTINUE...PRETTY PLEASE ....WITH SUGAR ON TOP ....AND A CHERRY!!!!
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Reviewed By: Inu_inu_luvluv [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2008 02:24 CST
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protective father and his chew toy, boy is this fun!!! good work! and Kagome Threatening Patrick? Priceless! by the way, could you put the pairings up in somewhere, because personally i don't really remember them anymore. inu/ayame, kag/sess... anyways keep going!
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Reviewed By: kagome45556 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2008 16:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
cool, I like it, very original.
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Reviewed By: imanewme [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2008 12:06 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Whoa. Sesshoumaru is quite the horny dog, isn't he? *giggle* Protective father looks good on him, too. This is fun.
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