| "Peace" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: emeraldiris [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2002 05:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
hmm, original story line. Would be very interesting to see how the story develops. If you continue it that is. If you don't, it was a very good one-shot! :) |
Reviewed By: Myst_Lady [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2002 08:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
How did James and Misty got hitched in the first place? This is probably you're going to explain as the story develops. Of course, dealing with Jessie's jealousy. Where does Ash fits in the picture then? |
