| "Captured and Trapped" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: opalescentmoonshine [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2015 21:39 EDT
Comment/Review:
Please update!!!!
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Reviewed By: inu-babe [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2009 21:26 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awsome story so far and i love the plot of it so far. cant wait till the next update!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2009 19:33 EST
Comment/Review:
thank you for the update, i love this story
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Reviewed By: nightshade41230 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2008 20:29 EDT
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the story is wonderful..will inuyasha come and save them in time..will Sessomaru love kagome?curious,,can't wait to read more
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2008 08:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh!!!! VERY good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: theblackangels_ [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2008 07:58 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
srry. buzy. so, i guess ill have to make this short and sweet. love it. though i really have to go. update soon! bye! ~sessh- Hey! dont i get to talk to the traitor?! ~TBA~
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Reviewed By: theblackangels_ [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2008 23:06 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sessh-strapped to a chair* lucky! ~tba-sits next to him in a chair with a box of dog biscuts in one hand and raw meat in te other* shut up and ill give u some meat. ~sessh-dont tell me wat to- ~tba-shoves meat in his mouth* shut up. ~sessh-chews meat*mm... wat is this? cow? `tba-yep. *shakes biscut box*want some? ~sessh-is it beef flavored? ~tba-uh... *looks at label* i think its chicken. ~sessh- then i refuse to eat it! `tba-shakes heard* oh well. u know wat they say. u cant teach a stubbon dog new tricks. ~sessh-dont u mean old dog? ~tba-looks at him up and down* not in this case. besides, ur only... wat? 600? 700? ~sessh-looks away* thats none of ur concern ~tba-smile* oh well. hope u update soon. its comming along better. i bet kagura would like to 'visit' sessh. ~sessh-growls* let me out!*chains rattle* ~tba-.....*thinks 4 a sec* uh.., no... i dont think i will. bye! *walks away* ~sessh-GET BACK HERE AND UNTIE ME!8SHAKES CHAIR* I WILL GET U 4 THIS!!!!!!!!!!! ~TBA~
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Reviewed By: Broken Tainted Wings [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2008 16:13 EDT
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it is a good plot line, but the grammar errors made it harder for me to read, though i did manage. work with your beta a little more, and keep up the good work. I look forward to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2008 06:24 EDT
Comment/Review:
this is good, please update soon.
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Reviewed By: theblackangels_ [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2008 19:50 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
uh... some cases... u have to suck the posion out to cure. ~kag-blush* u want me to.... put my lips on him?! ~sessh-............................ ~tba- hey. i said some cases. got any better ideas? ~kags- dont i get uh... posioned to? ~tba- not really. scince they are still bleeding. and they are infected with posion. suck the posion from the blood and spit it out. it wont hurt u unless u swallow. ~sessh-hm.. ~kag- HEY! IT WAS BAD ENOUGH I TOUCHED HIM WITH MY HANDS! ON HIS......pefect skin... but now u want me 2 do THAT!!!!!!!!! ~sessh-..... if it is the only soulution. i approve. ~kags- AK! UR ALL CRAZY! ~tba-lol. ~sessh- update soon. and i better not die. *glare* ~tba- pulls sessh away from camera* come'on. lets get u some help. u cant kill some one if u can touch her. ~sessh- grrrrrrrrr... U GOT LUCKY...... ~TBA~
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Reviewed By: theblackangels_ [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2008 18:36 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww `kags- that sounds sweet. ~sessh- pouts- stupid girls. and thier stupid sappy stories. and me being hurt! ha! a female couldnt even- ~tba- hits him with her hand on the back of his head- Shut up! no one asked 4 Your opinion! ~sessh-on floor- i . hate. u. ~tba- rolls eyes- alot of people do. so take a number and wait ur turn! ~kags- im thinking over the amount of boys in ur school. ~tba- uh.. more or less. ~sessh-who wouldnt? she praticly chases them and whailes on them 4 calling her a bitch/whore/and wench. ~tba-growls- wat. was. that. sesshomaru!? ~sessh- u know only dogs are suppossed to growl. right? ~tba- i dont follow the rules. thats why i break' em. ~both- true. ~tba-update soon! ~sessh+kags-BYE! ~TBA~
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Reviewed By: buzzk97 On: February 03, 2008 01:11 EST
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I really like your story. I am curious as to how sess got caught and if he is going to let Kags let her help him.
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Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2008 18:39 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I like this so far. I hope you keep working on it because I really would like to see how it goes. You did have a few words that ran together likethis, but I was still able to read it... I really hope you get the next chapter out soon.
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