"Chemical" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Title: Whaa???? Reviewed By: pyrzm [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2008 11:40 CST Comment/Review: Hey, I just noticed that this is a oneshot?? Nooooooo! This is such a great start. You should continue it.
| Title: Ch 1 Reviewed By: pyrzm [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2008 11:37 CST Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: Wow, I really enjoyed that, and I don't usually like 1st person pov. You do angst really well, and your descriptions of the characters really show who they are. And you've already given us a hint of their background. Nice job!
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